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Welcome to my fic!
Chapter one: Energy
The thirteen year old Liamoon walked next to his mother, in the crowded city of Desatrat. Liamoon's short black hair blew in the icy winds of Desatrat. He shivered, and pulled his blue jacket closer to his body. His mother was desperately scanning the stalls, looking for what she needed. Liamoon knew what was coming. Tomorrow, the Desatratee's would come. Robots, created by beings from another world, which scanned Desatrat for any beings and killed them. They were terrifying creatures, soulless and merciless. They came every few months, and in the days before they came, the people had to stock up on food and drink and other supplies, as the Desatratee's raid may last for days. The longest raid yet was four weeks long, and many died of hunger and thirst. Liamoon wished that he could one day destroy those creatures. He could still remember the day his Aunty went...
The entire family was in the house, all in the basement. They had locked every opening above, and were waiting for it to begin. Then they heard the signals, those terrifying signals that announced that the robots had arrived. As there ships hit the ground, there was a deep rumbling sound, followed by a large tremor underground. The house shook. Liamoon was five years old at the time, so he couldn't understand what exactly was happening. His father had told him that they were playing a game, and whoever stayed the quietest and stillest would win. He normally won (they finally broke the terrifying truth to him when he was nine). They would occasionally eat and drink very quietly. It was a tense and terrifying situation for the adults, but to Liamoon it was nothing more then an innocent game, played for fun. Now Liamoon understood how lucky they were, as the robots used to think the house was empty. As Liamoon lay down in the corner, he wandered if he was going to win, and why his uncle and aunt had decided to join in this time. Normally, it was just him, dad, mom and his older sister, Beatrice. They all lay in silence, the adults listening carefully for any signs of the robots above, and Liamoon trying hard to win the game. When his aunt suddenly dashed up, and tried to open the hatch to the outside, every adult in the room ran at her, trying to stop her going out to an instant suicide. Liamoon thought that she was cheating, so all the adults were trying to stop her. He lay quietly still.
What Liamoon?s aunt was really doing was going out to get her prized medal that she won when she was a child. It was only when she was in the house and everything was bolted up when she realised she had lost it. Everybody told her that they could come any second, and that if she unbolted anything then it would take quite a while to bolt it up, and that may mean death for the entire family. But when she was locked up in the basement, her mind told her it was worth risking her life for. When you?re locked up like that, it?s easy to do foolish things.
So, Liamoon?s aunt opened the hatch and ran out, her husbands trying to follow her. But, Liamoon?s parents stopped him. He broke down into tears. Meanwhile, Liamoon paid little attention to this, as he was busy trying to win the game. Liamoon?s sister bravely went out to see if her aunt had survived. When she went out, she saw it. Her aunt was kneeling down on the sands outside the house, looking for the medal, and two humanoid, black robots were in the distance. They held guns. Beatrice had to stop herself from screaming out to her dear aunt, but restrained herself for her and the family?s protection. The robots spotted her aunt, and levitated into the air, and flew towards her aunt. Beatrice dived back under the hatch, as to make the robots think the house was empty. She reported that her aunt was going to die. Her uncle burst into tears, and the family calmed him down, as the robots would definitely hear. They later told Liamoon that his aunt had lost the game, so she had to go home. Liamoon accepted this without questioning, and when he was broke the news about the truth of Desatrat, he was told that his aunt was dead.
Liamoon was still angry at his parents for lying to him. It didn?t matter now, but he would of preferred to be told the truth when he was younger. He still had an anger concealed inside of him for what they did. They broke him off from the truth, and scarred him for life. He didn?t trust anybody now.
Liamoon?s mother spotted some food that she wanted and strolled over to pick it up. Liamoon went over to a stall that sold cartridges for his games console, so he could play it when the robots came. Suddenly, he heard a scream. When he turned around, he saw his mother on the floor, and the man behind the stall of food was pointing a gun at her.
?Don?t make a move, you filthy burglar! Thought you could outsmart me, eh? Thought that you could just steal food from my stall? I don?t think so!? he said, and smiled at her.
Liamoon?s mother remained still. Then, all of a sudden, the man made a move for her shirt, and ripped it off, revealing the purple bra underneath. The man began to chuckle and soon everybody was laughing at her. Liamoon was so angry. He ran over to the man, not knowing that he was running to quick for anybody to see, and punched him in the stomach.
The man doubled over in pain, and fell to the ground, and Liamoon was standing over him, an angry look on his face. The man coughed and coughed, before getting up and pointing the gun at the kid.
?What do you think you?re doing, smartass? Trying to protect you?re mom, here? Well, guess what, the big man?s got a gun? he said, waving the silver handgun in Liamoon?s face, in a mocking way. Soon, everybody was laughing.
Liamoon swiped at the gun, and it went flying out of the man?s hand, and over the heads of the audience. Liamoon hovered into the air (accidentally) and towered over the man.
?Well now the big man HASN?T got a gun? he said, into the man?s face, before spitting at it. Everybody watched in silence.
?Why you little brat! I?ll teach you to mess with me!? he roared, and ran at Liamoon. Liamoon flew back onto the ground, before kicking out at his stomach. The man was hauled back by the impact, and sent flying into his own stall. His food exploded all over him, and he was knocked out. Liamoon walked over to the stall, and picked up an intact can of food. Then, he heard a whirring sound. Soon, motorbikes pulled up to Liamoon.
?Put you?re hands up? one of them said, ?You?re under arrest?
Chapter one: Energy
The thirteen year old Liamoon walked next to his mother, in the crowded city of Desatrat. Liamoon's short black hair blew in the icy winds of Desatrat. He shivered, and pulled his blue jacket closer to his body. His mother was desperately scanning the stalls, looking for what she needed. Liamoon knew what was coming. Tomorrow, the Desatratee's would come. Robots, created by beings from another world, which scanned Desatrat for any beings and killed them. They were terrifying creatures, soulless and merciless. They came every few months, and in the days before they came, the people had to stock up on food and drink and other supplies, as the Desatratee's raid may last for days. The longest raid yet was four weeks long, and many died of hunger and thirst. Liamoon wished that he could one day destroy those creatures. He could still remember the day his Aunty went...
The entire family was in the house, all in the basement. They had locked every opening above, and were waiting for it to begin. Then they heard the signals, those terrifying signals that announced that the robots had arrived. As there ships hit the ground, there was a deep rumbling sound, followed by a large tremor underground. The house shook. Liamoon was five years old at the time, so he couldn't understand what exactly was happening. His father had told him that they were playing a game, and whoever stayed the quietest and stillest would win. He normally won (they finally broke the terrifying truth to him when he was nine). They would occasionally eat and drink very quietly. It was a tense and terrifying situation for the adults, but to Liamoon it was nothing more then an innocent game, played for fun. Now Liamoon understood how lucky they were, as the robots used to think the house was empty. As Liamoon lay down in the corner, he wandered if he was going to win, and why his uncle and aunt had decided to join in this time. Normally, it was just him, dad, mom and his older sister, Beatrice. They all lay in silence, the adults listening carefully for any signs of the robots above, and Liamoon trying hard to win the game. When his aunt suddenly dashed up, and tried to open the hatch to the outside, every adult in the room ran at her, trying to stop her going out to an instant suicide. Liamoon thought that she was cheating, so all the adults were trying to stop her. He lay quietly still.
What Liamoon?s aunt was really doing was going out to get her prized medal that she won when she was a child. It was only when she was in the house and everything was bolted up when she realised she had lost it. Everybody told her that they could come any second, and that if she unbolted anything then it would take quite a while to bolt it up, and that may mean death for the entire family. But when she was locked up in the basement, her mind told her it was worth risking her life for. When you?re locked up like that, it?s easy to do foolish things.
So, Liamoon?s aunt opened the hatch and ran out, her husbands trying to follow her. But, Liamoon?s parents stopped him. He broke down into tears. Meanwhile, Liamoon paid little attention to this, as he was busy trying to win the game. Liamoon?s sister bravely went out to see if her aunt had survived. When she went out, she saw it. Her aunt was kneeling down on the sands outside the house, looking for the medal, and two humanoid, black robots were in the distance. They held guns. Beatrice had to stop herself from screaming out to her dear aunt, but restrained herself for her and the family?s protection. The robots spotted her aunt, and levitated into the air, and flew towards her aunt. Beatrice dived back under the hatch, as to make the robots think the house was empty. She reported that her aunt was going to die. Her uncle burst into tears, and the family calmed him down, as the robots would definitely hear. They later told Liamoon that his aunt had lost the game, so she had to go home. Liamoon accepted this without questioning, and when he was broke the news about the truth of Desatrat, he was told that his aunt was dead.
Liamoon was still angry at his parents for lying to him. It didn?t matter now, but he would of preferred to be told the truth when he was younger. He still had an anger concealed inside of him for what they did. They broke him off from the truth, and scarred him for life. He didn?t trust anybody now.
Liamoon?s mother spotted some food that she wanted and strolled over to pick it up. Liamoon went over to a stall that sold cartridges for his games console, so he could play it when the robots came. Suddenly, he heard a scream. When he turned around, he saw his mother on the floor, and the man behind the stall of food was pointing a gun at her.
?Don?t make a move, you filthy burglar! Thought you could outsmart me, eh? Thought that you could just steal food from my stall? I don?t think so!? he said, and smiled at her.
Liamoon?s mother remained still. Then, all of a sudden, the man made a move for her shirt, and ripped it off, revealing the purple bra underneath. The man began to chuckle and soon everybody was laughing at her. Liamoon was so angry. He ran over to the man, not knowing that he was running to quick for anybody to see, and punched him in the stomach.
The man doubled over in pain, and fell to the ground, and Liamoon was standing over him, an angry look on his face. The man coughed and coughed, before getting up and pointing the gun at the kid.
?What do you think you?re doing, smartass? Trying to protect you?re mom, here? Well, guess what, the big man?s got a gun? he said, waving the silver handgun in Liamoon?s face, in a mocking way. Soon, everybody was laughing.
Liamoon swiped at the gun, and it went flying out of the man?s hand, and over the heads of the audience. Liamoon hovered into the air (accidentally) and towered over the man.
?Well now the big man HASN?T got a gun? he said, into the man?s face, before spitting at it. Everybody watched in silence.
?Why you little brat! I?ll teach you to mess with me!? he roared, and ran at Liamoon. Liamoon flew back onto the ground, before kicking out at his stomach. The man was hauled back by the impact, and sent flying into his own stall. His food exploded all over him, and he was knocked out. Liamoon walked over to the stall, and picked up an intact can of food. Then, he heard a whirring sound. Soon, motorbikes pulled up to Liamoon.
?Put you?re hands up? one of them said, ?You?re under arrest?
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