[Other] Looking for criticism for my map!

[marillmau5]

Please do your worst so I can make it something great.

i.imgur.com/AP40seD.png

HOUSES
Prof Lab - far left
Fishermans Hut - top middle
Small Town - top right
Bill type characters home - far right

ROUTES
Grasslands - entrance above town
Waterlands - leaving map on water
Caves - surfing to the cave system

This game is for RMVX ACE. The map is intended to work as a main hub for the player.

Disclaimer: Sorry that this isnt going to be true to pokemon at all.
Story: Mew transformed into a human that ended up dying, but it created almost a fusion. The boy was lost forever and mew forgot who she was. The results from the accident ended with mew not knowing shes a pokemon and living as the boy. The main hero boy/mew discovers in the only known human form he can fight pokemon and withstand the pain. Thus our hero sets on a journey to do quests to help the people of the town. A story of self discovery and pain.
Working Titles: Pocket Monster Hunter. or Pokemon Voyage
Quests: You head to the gym to do main quests. These quests are ranked D, C, B, A, and S.

Also: I'm open to any map makers that use jhoto map to make maps to work with. I have each quest worked out in script. 65 Quests in total (can change)

 

[JosefigGaming]

https://www.pokecommunity.com/threads/226711
Post that on that thread
I'm not gonna rate your map cause I don't want you to get spoiled :P xD

 

[marillmau5]

thank you please rate it on that link you just gave me, thanks!

 

[Christos]

Well, since you've posted in the Map Rating/Review thread as well I'll close this.

 

[Logan]

Also, as a sidenote if your map is made in RMXP (or affiliates) then you'll need to post it in the Game Development forum.