On that note,I never really have been good at computers.But anyway:
Chapter 2: Rumblebump Volcano
"It's a little warm," Luigi muttered, the sweat dripping from his brow as he
followed the compass up Rumblebump Volcano's side. "Must...find...the...
secret...grotto." While Luigi had guts to spare, he did need a guide, and he
found one in Blooey, a Blooper he met in town. Brave Blooey joined Luigi and
instantly proved to be invaluable. With his
aid, Luigi bested a savage statue that protected the treasure. That treasure
was none other than a piece of the Marvelous Compass, a piece that pointed west to Plumpbelly Village.
Luigis Versoin:
As soon as my ship docked on the Pudding Continent, I set out for the volcano.
To reach my destination, I spent several days fording through dense jungle...
Scary beasts were all over! More than once I thought I was done for, Bro! I
may have screamed a bit. To scare them off, you know. But as fate would have
it... A Blooper named Blooey heard me shrieking and found me in this one town.
Blooey was on a journey of his own, but he joined me after hearing my tale.
Now, Blooey's a madman. Back in his hometown, they call him "White Torpedo"!
Yeah, he's a tough guy. Anyway, he helped me fight to Rumblebump Volcano.
This place was all about bubbling lava pools and heat that'd make the sun
sweat. AND, the place was lousy
with evil traps designed to protect the compass piece. The scariest one of all
was this gigantic, 100-foot-tall statue that stomped around. Now, the weakness
of this giant statue, Bro, was a red gem on its forehead... Now, I can jump
high, but not high enough to reach this thing by a long shot. So I came up
with this plan for Blooey to hit that weak spot! "All you, man!" I said. I
waited for a pause in the statue's movements and hucked Blooey up there!
And bull's-eye! The White Torpedo saved the day! That jewel got
whacked! It was a critical hit, and that stone statue toppled and crumbled
into pieces! Once that was done, it was an easy stroll to the room where the
treasure was. Unfortunately, Princess Eclair was nowhere to be found... But I
got another piece of the Marvelous Compass, and put it in the base... Now the
compass pointed west, to Plumpbelly Village on the Strudel Continent. So I set
sails once again and came back here to Rougeport to recharge. That's what
happened to me lately, but I'll be heading back out soon...
Blooey the Blooper's comments: "Hey there, I'm Blooey. ...And this guy is a
total liar! Don't listen to him! You heard his story, right? Well, he did
TRY to throw me, but he completely tripped! And what happens? I end up
landing in lava! LAVA, man! You think that feels good? [But if that's true,
how did Luigi beat that statue thing?] Thanks to him, you can stick a fork in
me! I'm well-done! My pale skin's crispified! I'll NEVER forgive this guy!
I'm gonna make him pay if it takes my whole lifetime! That's the ONLY reason
I'm still hanging around with him. YOU'LL PAY, LUIGI!"
While i'm at it,i'm adding chapter 3.And trust me.You do not want to see Luigi dressed as a bride.
Chapter 3: Plumpbelly Village
The second Luigi saw Plumpbelly Village, he knew
something was amiss. All was woe, and Luigi soon learned the reason why from
the mayor. The town was at the mercy of a sinister serpent, who demanded
sacrificial lasses. Burning with indignation, Luigi formed a team of
liberators. A fierce Bob-omb warrior named Jerry joined his crew and chose,
not surprisingly, to stick with Luigi for the duration of his quest for Eclair.
Fortified by his allies, Luigi strode on into the lair of the beast, a foul,
two-headed snake. No time to think! Luigi sprang forth! Twin
heads snapped at his heels, fangs dripping venom! Then, as one mouth gaped
wide to swallow Luigi, the other crept behind... Our hero searched the
treachery, and feinted before leaping! The heads collided, and the beast ate itself!
The prize? A compass piece! The villagers begged their savior to stay with them,
but a grim-faced Luigi pressed bravely onward.
Luigi's Versoin:
Once we made landfall on the Strudel Continent, we made for Plumpbelly Village.
Once we got there, though, we immediately noticed that something was wrong. We
learned from the mayor that the town was ruled by a giant snake named Hizza!
He said that his own daughter was gonna be offered up as a sacrifice to this
beast, too! So, of course, being heroic, I offered myself up to go in her
stead! Brave, huh? Now, the custom was for sacrifices to be dressed as
brides, so I got all dolled up... I was one hot sacrifice, Bro. I looked so good, I fooled our foes and got in Hizza's lair. It was kind of rough fighting in that gown, but I managed. Chiffon
really chafes, Bro! I finally found Hizza... and the snake had a second head
on its tail! Talk about scary! I fainted real quick, but when I came to, I
managed to distract both heads... It reared up, fangs bared to attack, and at
that moment, I deftly lunged left! His gaping mouths smashed into one
another... and he vanished in a cloud of smoke! A shining plate fell down on the spot where
Hizza's body had been coiled... Yes! Another compass piece! I set it, and it
pointed east, to Circuit Break Island! Just as I was about to leave town, the
mayor asked me to stay and marry his daughter. I thought about it--she was
sorta cute--but we ended up sneaking off the next morning. I mean, I still
have to save Princess Eclair from the Chestnut King! And...when the Marvelous
Compass activated this time, I heard somebody's voice. It was so beautiful,
Bro... I'm certain it was Princess Eclair's voice! My heart began to race!
That's when I realized it: Princess Eclair... I think I... Oh! I kinda zoned
out there. Umm... So, yeah. We set sail again after ditching town... And
somehow we managed to get back here to Rougeport. And here I am!
Jerry the Bob-omb's comments: "Hi, I guess. I'm Jerry. I'm a Bob-omb from
Plumpbelly Village. Nice meeting you. Sorry I sound so down, but you would be
too if you saw Luigi dressed as a bride. I'm serious. It scarred me.
It was honestly scarier than that giant snake-thing. I feel I now have a moral duty to stop Luigi from ever dressing
as a bride again. I have to protect the world from my fate. That's why I'm
sticking close to this guy."
As alway's,I feel the need to put another chapter.
Chapter 4: Circuit Break Island
Dauntless Luigi's next test came in the form of a kart race on Circuit Break
Island, where he won both the contest and a compass piece. The race was fraught with
danger, but Luigi pressed through
adversity to win! All viewers were awed by Luigi's revolutionary racing style.
The mechanic who built Luigi's racing machine, a Buzzy Beetle named Torque, was so
stunned by Luigi's race techniques that he joined him.
Luigi's Versoin:
Just as our boat arrived at Circuit Break Island, we heard this incredible
racket! We soon found out that they hold kart races almost every day on the
island. Whoever takes first place in the race gets to rule the island as king
for that day. Just as we got to the race-track, they were holding the awards
ceremony... I couldn't believe my eyes! Right there, on the trophy they give
to the winner... It was another piece of the Marvelous Compass! I almost
passed dead away! I decided right then and there that the only thing to do was
enter the next race. I mean, I've driven in kart races before, so
I thought I'd be OK. Boy, was I wrong. The karts were supercharged machines
that could send you airborne with their exhaust! These vehicles were armed
with missiles and bazookas... It was "anything goes," Bro! Of course, I wanted
to get right out of there, pronto! These drivers were crazed! But I worked up
my courage and signed up anyway. And my race day finally came... I got one of
the best karts: the Big Green 01! I took my position at the start line... The
light went green, I stomped the accelerator... and something bad happened.
I was in reverse! The Big Green 01 went rocketing backwards with me yelling...
I crashed into the wall
behind me hard enough to cut me off midscream. In one fell swoop I dropped into last place and
wrecked my racing machine... But it wasn't all bad news: all the other cars
crashed because of my maneuver... Once I got in gear and took off, I was the
only car left! I won by a country mile, Bro! I took the piece off of my trophy and added it
to the Marvelous Compass... The compass came to life and pointed me toward
Jazzafrazz Town in the east! Then I heard that voice! Princess Eclair's voice
echoed in my ears again! Oh, my princess! Random words would form poetry if
spoken by your voice! I will most definitely save you! Just wait for me!
Princess Eclair!!! Oh! Sorry about that, Bro... Umm... So, after that, I got
back on my boat... And came back here to Rougeport. And that's what's been up
with me.
Torque the Buzzy Beetle's comments: "Yeah, I'm Torque, and don't for a second
think this dude's tellin' the whole story. The only reason I lent him my rig
was 'cause he got down on his knees and begged. And what happens? He's in it
for one second before he completely totals it! Idiot! I'm not lettin' this
dip outta my sight until he repays me the 5,000-coin repair costs!"
I'm probably going to add the whole story in one night.But still.
Chapter 5: Jazzafrazz Town
Luigi set sail for Jazzafrazz Town, where he made his stage debut!
Hayzee, a noted Dayzee producer, gave Luigi a key role. Playing the part of an
earth spirit to pure perfection [what happened to grass?], Luigi stole the
show. Hayzee's faith in Luigi's natural acting talents was rewarded. The
performance won a prize, which yielded another compass piece. Hayzee turned
from teacher to pupil, joining Luigi on his quest. It was at this
time that Luigi's heart, usually draped in the cool
comfort of a hero's resolve, began to warm with thoughts of Princess Eclair.
This came to be because every time the magic compass pointed to a new place,
her gentle words rang in her ears, touching him to his very soul. The voice
spoke of eternity, of stars in the heavens. It wept for those blind to love.
It gave comfort in the face of fear and loneliness.
Though he had never seen her, our hero was tormented by visions of this fair-
hearted maiden. All he could do was press onward. The compass pointed toward
Rapturous Ruins. Only two parts of the compass awaited, and Eclair had one...
Luigi's Versoin:
As soon as we hit Jazzafrazz Town, we were overcome by the glitz and the
glamour. It's a very lively place, Bro. Tons of Dayzees live there, and
they're always smiling! While looking for the piece of compass, I met a hip
Dayzee named Hayzee. Hayzee was a producer, and he was looking for actors to
go on stage with him. I told him we couldn't, since we were looking for the
compass part, you know. But Hayzee said we could WIN the compass part in the
upcoming Drama Slam! He said the so-called Dramalama Plaque might, in fact, be
one of the parts! Well, we just had to give it a try, so we rehearsed with the
cast and hit the stage! Our musical was called "The Mystery of the Fiery Hat
of Social Awareness." The script was great, but I got
really hosed, Bro... My "role"... My "part"... ...Was grass! I played grass by
the side of the road! Grass, Bro! Grass! I just sprawled out on the ground
and had to be silent. Everyone but me had lines... I don't care if I was
wearing green! Who casts someone based on that? It was awful!
In the end, our musical was the talk on the town, and we won
the Drama Slam. I got the compass part I was after, but even that didn't make
me very happy. The huge after-party just bummed me out more, so I snuck out
the back door. But WOW! Outside were tons of fans! MY fans! Fans of grass!
They swarmed me! I just couldn't believe it! Imagine! Cheering for grass! I
was ecstatic, Bro! After that I added the piece to the Marvelous Compass, which pointed
north. It pointed to the Rapturous Ruins in Grimble Forest. Then... The voice
again... Oh, my cherished Princess Eclair! How you soothe me! I would be
grass for you... I will find you! I will reach you! I will stand by your side
and be your Luigi! Wow. Sorry about that, Bro. Umm... So, yeah, anyway...
Then I got back on my boat. I came back to Rougeport, and here I am, another
leg of my adventure completed!
Hayzee the Dayzee's comments: "I'm Hayzee! And I must say, Luigi is a great
actor, one of the finest I've seen! After this adventure, we're going on tour to appear on
stages everywhere! I'm going to be known as "The Red Miracle"! And, of
course, Luigi will be grass!"
Heck,while i'm at it...Lets toss in chapter six!
Chapter 6: Rapturous Ruins
Footsore and weary, Luigi finally found the Rapturous Ruins beyond Grimble
Forest. Within them, time and space were lost in nothingness. Within the
pale emptiness, Luigi found a young sleeping boy.
Our hero called out gently, and the youth woke from his
long, long slumber. "My name is Cranberry, and I've waited for you for the
last thousand years." The boy went on to tell Luigi the secret truths of an
ancient land. He said that the Marvelous Compass had been created by the
ancient Luff people, who used its powers of foretelling to rule the world. But
the Luff empire was then cursed by the compass, and fell into ruin...
The survivors dismantled the compass and
hid its pieces. Cranberry was the last of the ancient race. His role was to
wait until one with a noble heart came to take the burden of the future. None
but Luigi could have shouldered this weight. The boy gave him the compass
piece, and said, "Fear the curse, but find your Eclair." Luigi accepted the
part, the boy's words burned into his brain. His duty fulfilled, the boy began
to fade into the blank nothingness... As he faded from sight, a look of joy lit
Cranberry's face. As Luigi gaped, both boy and ruins vanished, leaving our
hero in a dark wood. With six of the parts united, the compass now pointed to
the final part... To the quest's end... To Hatesong Tower. And then, her voice
spoke... Princess Eclair's voice begged for help from the void, pleading for a
hero. Luigi's heart burst aflame...
Luigi's Versoin:
After journeying deep into the Grimble Forest, I found the domed Rapturous
Ruins. Inside, everything was pure white. You couldn't tell where the floor
became walls... Proceeding dead ahead, I found myself in a chamber where a
young boy sat. As I approached the boy, someone named Screamy appeared out of
nowhere! Screamy said the boy's name was Cranberry, and that he'd wake for a
child of fate. That didn't make any sense to me, so I started searching
quietly for the compass piece. But then it happened, Bro: I got a tiny tickle
in my nose, and I let out a huge sneeze! Well, Cranberry must've heard it,
'cause he opened his eyes right up! He looked at me and smiled. And all of a
sudden I could understand his language! Can you believe it? I learned that
the boy was the last of an ancient race, the Luffs... He had been there
guarding the Marvelous Compass piece for the last thousand years! He told me
that the compass is an item with the power to see into the future... The
ancient Luff empire used the power of the compass to rule much of the world.
Because of their greed, they were cursed by the compass, and their empire
collapsed. To prevent a repeat of their fate, Cranberry broke the compass into
seven parts. He hid six and kept one, putting himself
to sleep until a worthy hero woke him. I WAS that hero, Bro! He gave it to me, and then he
and the ruins vanished... When I added that piece to the compass... It pointed
to the far north, where dreaded Hatesong Tower stands. This time, I heard
Princess Eclair's voice more clearly than ever before! I will rescue the
princess! I will be super! And then I'll... I'll... I'll... Well, I'll figure
the rest out later. Anyway, I headed back here to Rougeport after that. I'm
making my final preparations for my final battle now. I'm a little nervous,
Bro. But that's what I've been up to, anyway!
Screamy the ???'s comments: "...I'm Screamy. I wonder what future is plotted
for us by he who holds the compass... For I must deliver something..."
So sorry for the shortness of this story,but all good things have to come to an end.
Chapter 7: Hatesong Tower
At long last, Luigi crossed the threshold of Hatesong Tower. Luigi rallied his
allies. "We will defeat the Chestnut King. We must!" Friends by his side,
Luigi at last faced the fell Chestnut King...but then he heard a voice, and
spun to see the fair Princess Eclair. She told our hero the painful truth: the
"evil" Chestnut King was actually her true love, made monstrous by Crepe in a
bid for the throne. At that moment, the villainous Crepe appeared. "The
Marvelous Compass, please. Hand it over, and the Luff empire will rule again!
Mwa ha!" Luigi and Co. were no match for the
might of Crepe, their true enemy. But then, the compass piece in Eclair's
tiara shone forth! It bestowed the future-sight on Luigi! Knowing Crepe's
every move, he smote the fiend with his mallet! And with that...it was finally
over. Luigi and his friends parted, leaving the Waffle Kingdom in peace. But
Luigi regretted not gazing farther into the future... He longed to see the
Wafflers gathering on Princess Eclair's wedding day... He wanted to see her
beauty, and who stood at her side... But it was not to be. Luigi went back to his humble
home, which remained exactly as he had left it, a cold comfort for his heavy
heart. Taking up a book he had been reading, Luigi tried to read, but his long trial had sapped
his strength, and he soon fell asleep. Luigi dreamt of his friends and his
beloved Princess Eclair. And sleeping, Luigi spoke... "I shall return."
Luigi's Versoin:
Hatesong Tower stands atop a jagged, unclimbable cliff beyond the northernmost
sea. The winds whistle down the cliff, howling like banshees singing songs of
hate... People say it's pretty much the scariest place in the world. And I had
to go there. Blocking out the bone-chilling howls, I somehow managed to reach
the tower's door. I was terrified, but thoughts of Princess Eclair warmed my
heart and gave me power. All of my companions felt the same way. They were
with me to the bitter end. The door to the tower swung slowly opened to reveal
an inconceivable darkness... I tried
to call out Princess Eclair's name, but I couldn't even breathe because... As I
strained my eyes in the darkness, I saw the most terrifying beast of all! The
Chestnut King himself appeared before me! He was monstrous and drooling!
Puddles of toxic goo dripped from his mouth, melting the very ground at our
feet! I couldn't stop shaking, but I gritted my teeth and faced the evil beast
dead-on! I dodged the king's fangs, jumped onto his chest, and gave him a
hammer-whack! My swing split the air and crashed
dead-center onto the Chestnut King's skull! Hope powered me up, Bro! I was
going toe-to-toe with the king, and I was loving it! "This is it!" I thought!
I can win this! I'll risk it all on my next blow! I gripped my hammer tight
and waited for my moment... The tension stung me... SHHHWHAAAAACK! The ocean
winds raged against the tower windows! With that sound as my call to battle, I
advanced with no mercy in my heart! And then..................................
............ And then..........................................................
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.............................................. I beat him. I defeated the
Chestnut King. An even worse beast came next, a nightmare thing... but I beat
it, too. ...........................
I rescued Princess Eclair. It was all over. And then I came back to Rougeport
and had a light lunch. And that's about it. .......................... Huh?
You think there's more to the story than that? Not at all. That's it. That's
the whole story of the quest for Princess Eclair. The End. But my adventures
won't end here, Bro... They'll never end...
Blooey's comments: "Hey! You! Remember me? It's me, Blooey! Maaaan, that
last battle was hairy! You have no idea! I was burnt to a crisp, but I was
actually kinda relieved, if you can believe that! But if you want the
whole story, you should just ask Luigi here! Wahahaha!"
If anyone is actually reading this,thank-you for taking the time out of your day to inspect the story.It was pretty enjoyable to write actually.Yeah.
