Magmortar's Eggs - Need Help

[Darokkian Magmortar]

HI! Im new here and i dont speak english well. Im from argentina >_<

This is my deck, and i need some master help. Is for playing regionals and nationals so, it need to be good xD.

Pokemons: 20
X4 Magmar MT
X3 Magmortar SW
X1 Magmortar Lv X
X3 Togekiss
X2 Togetic
X3 Togepi
X2 Heatran LA
X2 Heatran Lv X

Supporter: 9
X2 Cynthia's feelings
X3 Roseanne's Research
X4 Bebe's Search

Trainer: 14
X3 Rare Candy
X1 Luxury Ball
x4 Poke Drawer +
X2 Nigth Maintenance
X2 Warp Point
X2 Dusk Ball

Stadium: 1
X1 Stark Mountain

Energy: 16
X16 Fire Energy

The idea is OHKO with Magmortar. Togekiss will give Magmortar energys needed for OHKO. i dont know why heatran, a friend recomend me. I think is for the Lv X PokeBody, but i dont have anything that burn. Please i really need help!

Bye!

[Srry for bad english]

 

[!MajesticSmeargle!]

Wow, this is actually pretty good, you just need draw power.
OMG, heatran lv.X is so you don't discard energies from your magmortar lv.X.

Do you have any Blaziken? That would be also good for the deck, but you would have to take out the magmortars.

You need Claydols or Uxies in this deck, it's one of those slower decks so you need draw power.
Especially if you go against SP decks, this deck isn't that good against them, they are alot faster.

Instead of Duskball, play PokeRadar

 

[Darokkian Magmortar]

Thanks ^^
I dont have any blasiken, i prefer magmortar.
So claydol will be 2-2? But, what should i quit?
I cant quit energy, for magmortar/togekiss.
I will search for Pokeradars ^^

Bye! Thanks for the tips

 

[FurretFTW!!1!]

Don't add ANY Blaziken! The deck will just get super-clunky. It isn't the fastest deck, anyways, so...yeah.

Take out a Dusk Ball for a Rare Candy and the other for a Broken Time-Space. You NEED the Togekiss accel, but they're basically big Power Spray bait, so I dun liek. (It has too many weaknesses in this current format, so I'd suggest another deck for Regs and Nats.) Cut down the 3-2-3 Togekiss to 2-1-2 and add in 3 SSU so you can scoop and replay the Togekiss line a bit more and reuse Claydol (With BTS) or Uxie or something. Somehow, add in the Claydol. I'd take out 1-1 Heatran, 1 Magmar, and 1 Cynthia's Feelings for a 2-2 line. Take out the Stark Mountain for 1 Azelf LA and try getting a Uxie LA in the deck, too. It should work better, I guess. I've never played MagKiss... =P

~L_X_F

 

[Darokkian Magmortar]

Thanks!
I will add 3 SSU, a rare candy and 2 Uxies LA. I dont have th other cards >_<.
I will take out 1 togekiss, togetic, togepi, 1 Poke Radar[ Im using this instead of Dusk], 1 Cynthia and 1 Stark Mountain.
Now is like this:
Pokemons: 19
X4 Magmar MT
X3 Magmortar SW
X1 Magmortar Lv X
X2 Togekiss
X1 Togetic
X2 Togepi
X2 Heatran LA
X2 Heatran Lv X
X2 Uxie LA

Supporter: 8
X1 Cynthia's feelings
X3 Roseanne's Research
X4 Bebe's Search

Trainer: 17
X4 Rare Candy
X1 Luxury Ball
x4 Poke Drawer +
X2 Nigth Maintenance
X2 Warp Point
X1 Poke Radar
X3 Super Scoop Up

Energy: 16
X16 Fire Energy

This will work?