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This is getting better, but for me, this has some of the same things that needed fixing as some of your other pieces, but less so. What I mean is, you are taking the comments on board, but still not enough. Specifically I guess is the C4Ds, for my money, still much too blurry. Like it creates good depth, but just too much than is necessary, and you lose a lot of the details in the C4Ds. Speaking of the C4Ds, I feel that they aren't creating enough sense of flow. The C4Ds behind her for instance, I would rotate counter clockwise so they form more of a "bottom right to top left" sort of flow, which would help a lot.
Colours are ok, nothing special, and I think that's where it could've shone as a piece. You've got a bubbly sort of stock, and then you've got some greens and blues in the C4Ds, but they aren't popping. I feel more saturation, and less warm tones (not completely, just notch them down a bit) would help bring some more eye candy to the tag. It isn't monotonous, but it is borderline.
Text is good, but I would've gone a bit higher so as to bring it closer to her face as a focal. In that little gap between her hair and shoulder would be a nice little nook to tuck it in! C:
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I love this style so much...
Firstly, the composition is not bad, but it is a little too spaced out and has almost two focal points (each orb) which don't compliment each other like they could. The main thing is that they are too far away from each other with nothing joining them. If you had a more detailed background, even just like a space type background, few stars, particles and stuff, it might tie it all together a little stronger just by having bits in between the orbs. Otherwise, they could've just been moved a bit closer.
Some minor things, the text I am not feeling at all, sitting kind of awkwardly there. I feel it would look better with no text whatsoever, but if you can rejig it, maybe so it isn't overlapping with any of the orbs, it might sit nicer.
I've mentioned the background, I really do think it would help the piece, not just the two focal thing if it had more details. A lot of the pieces I've seen in this style have a blue or purple sort of background with some space, stars, nebula etc. This might be a reason to avoid doing so, given so many use it, but it definitely works regardless. Just room for thought.
Lastly, quality is a little low from over sharpening it seems. the orbs themselves have a bit of pixelation, especially the edges of each circle. That big orb at the bottom I'd say has too many light 'dots', and could go with a strong light source in the concentrated area in the bottom right.
Also, one little thing I saw, borrow orb, you've got some soft brushing or something like that which is cut off just before the bottom of the canvas (bottom left corner, and then bottom right near the end of the orb). Just looks a little bit untidy.
Sorry if that was not nice ratings or too harsh or anything. Been a while since I gave a proper rate, losing my touch. xP