mario vs sonic the comic. rated 13+ for blood,guts and gore

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    this is my first sprite comic of 2006 and i hope you enjoy it.
    as the title says its is rated 13+ so if you are below 13 please do not view this thank you

    the story.
    this is a sequel to razarcs.coms mario vs sonic the war. mario and sonic survived the battle. and peach some how managed to survive the fall. part 1 is here. enjoy everyone.

    [PokeCommunity.com] mario vs sonic the comic. rated 13+ for blood,guts and gore
    hopefully it should show. part 2 coming soon
     
    Hmmm... the texures bad... I don't really get it. The word that caught my eye the most was DIE! The spaech bubbles are awful. ood luck at cre8ing others though
     
    Him, this comic looks rather oddly done. One thing: Never save comics or any Paint done works as .JPG, as it blurs its quality and doesn't really appeal to your viewers. Also, you might want to think about how you're going to set out your comic, because from what I see, it doesn't look very neatly done. Nice attempt, but try and think about how you may lay out your comics before actually showing them :)
     
    Whooaaa...

    I don't know what to say about it o.o i just say that it really looks very odd.

    Also the credit, ther must be always credit.
     
    Yes, please give credit to the resource for any sprites that you borrowed. Sprite theft is an offense, so if you fail to give credit, it can result to you getting a warning. So trace where you found the sprites and give credit to the resource. :)
     
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