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- Seen Jan 26, 2008
Finally I'm back from my vacation. We'll here is the 1-?.
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Master Ben's comics
- Thread starter Master Ben
- Start date
The Dash
Hurr.
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- 19
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- Age 33
- Lurking in the shadows of the Games Development fo
- Seen Aug 1, 2024
Ugh that Ben sprite looks just terrible, the colors are disgusting at the least.
As for the comic the layout is awful and the text goes over the speech bubbles. Its to early for me to rate it but keep trying.
As for the comic the layout is awful and the text goes over the speech bubbles. Its to early for me to rate it but keep trying.
tallslover033
Chao Expert
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- mobius
- Seen Dec 20, 2005
yeah,keep trying i know you can do it!
jc_rcw
:God:
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- 19
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- Age 35
- Miami, Fl.
- Seen Jun 23, 2009
Try not using colors that are so bright, alos it looks a little disorganized.
jambo
Obey!
- 26
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- 19
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- A dustbin behind the back of your local poke'mart
- Seen Jun 15, 2010
I agree with the above use less bright neon colouration and in the mum/eggs scene try to fit the speach into the bubbles 3/10 overall
Smarties-chan
Should've had that name change
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- Age 23
- Seen Sep 12, 2015
I agree with the things above, but one thing disturbs me, how come a person Ben randomly meets somewhere outside town gives him a Pok?mon just like that?