Master Ben's journey!

Master Ben

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    This is my first comic series of Pokemon i'm doing so you can join with your characters and pokemon! You must have 6 or more sprites that form a sprite sheet. Well enjoy as I make the comics!
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    Ben: v Master Ben v
    Ben is known as the hero in this comic. He has two girls following him on his journey to become the ultimate Water Pokemon master!
    Rina: v Rina Packsell v
    Rina is one of the main characters in this comic. Rina was rescued by Master Ben so thats why she is one the journey with Ben. Rina is Master Ben's old childhood friend.

    Kris: v Kris Riffio v
    Kris is one of the main characters in this comic. Kris wants to help Ben train and get badges for her. Kris is a smart woman who has skills as a tiger. She really loses her tempure very quick when it comes to jelousy.
     
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    Well it doesn't look too bad, but it still needs more work.
     
    First: Don't just make the backround bigger, make the sprites bigger too
    Second: This comic needs work, and you should attach your comics to your post, go to photobucket or something and upload them, also save them as PNG
    Third: You shouldn't make one of your characters fall in love so early in the comic series
    Fourth: Try to put the text in speach bubbles
    Fifth: Read No More Excuses! 'Teh' Comics Tutorial! It will help you alot
     
    first of all:
    1) It needs a plot
    2) Try making the Bios of the characters
    3) Try using photobucket of imageshack for your comics

    Meh i almost posted all the errors that Blazin_Espio and Darkstrike posted but you must try anyway... here's a link to imageshack: www.imageshack.us
     
    Ok. I made the comic alittle better. So this is the real first comic. Ok.:( :\
    P.s: I need 15 posts to put my comic from the web to here.
     
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    I l**e it.

    ;) :laugh: :) :knockedou :P Master Ben you make good comics please may you continue.
     
    Ughh, more low quility comics, dude, don't resize sprites like the houndoom, they end up looking awful, grammar needs work, text under pannels = NO, default paint colours, 2 differant blues instead of two shades is bad.

    I could go on for hours.
     
    Can someone lock up this Thread untill I say to unlock because people don't like my comic. So can A Adim or some who can lock my thread please lock it up. Thank you. *Leaves the comic thread forever*
     
    Don"t!!!

    :sleeping: :disappoin :'( :( :disappoin :\ :surprised Don't close it Ben I love your comics! Please don't close them.
     
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