May I?

Breezy

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    Summary: (Hoennshipping) It sometimes takes more then to just love someone. Sometimes you have to prove it too.

    Welcome to teh sucky story of Breezy! I'm Breezy and I shall be your . . . writer for this story. Or something along those lines anyways. If you don't understand the summary (which is possible seeing as I don't even get it myself sometimes), I'll just say that this is, in fact, a Hoennshipping fic a.k.a. Brendan x May. I like using the Ruby/Sapphire game characters in my story btw. Anyways, the plot is kinda complicated to write in one paragraph so you might as well read on to see what happens no? ^^

    Oh yeah, pardon the lame Pok?mon that talk beginning thing I've got going on at the beginning. When I first wrote this story, I was really into developing the Pok?mon characters. Perhaps too much. *sweat-drops*

    On another note, "< ....... >" is Pokemon tongue translated human so um. . . yeah.


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    Chapter 1:
    What is love? Is it someone that you have a great affection for? That person that gives you that funny feeling in the pit of your stomach? Someone that makes you feel all woozy if they touch you by accident? The score in tennis if you have zero points? It is true that "love" is all of those things; we can all define it, but does that mean we know what it's like to be loved? Or to be in love?

    The autumn sky illuminated her angelic-like face, giving her a glow that no one but her could muster. Her deep sapphire eyes twinkled in the sunlight, the wind gently playing with her shoulder length chestnut hair. The soft, gentle rustling of leaves gave made the feeling of calmness, serenity. Her hand was entwined with a boy's as she gave a little squeeze. Soon, their faces came closer and closer together. . .

    "Oh . . . man . . . " a boy Pokemon trainer, known as Brendan, complained to himself as he sat up in his sleeping bag, running a hand through his snowy-white hair. "Why do I always wake up at the good parts?" he complained quietly, trying not to wake up his other traveling companion across the secret base they occupied.

    Brendan felt his stomach do a back flip when he saw the sleeping beauty of his a few feet away from him. "What a way to wake up in the morning!" he chuckled to himself as he got up and out fo his sleeping bag and out into the fresh morning air that waited to greet him.

    "< Man, he woke up . . . >" someone said sadly in Pokemon tongue, "< and it was getting juicy too . . . >"

    "< Why does Brendan wake up at the good parts? >" another thing whined in Pokemon tongue. "< His dreams are like cliffhangers! They just keep on continuing and continuing and- oh! Hey Brendan! Heh heh . . . >" the thing laughed nervously, rubbing the back of its head.

    "Muddy. . ." Brendan warned his Swampert, a smirk on his face. "What did I tell you about looking at my dreams?"

    "< Uh, not to? >" Muddy answered, forcing a fake smile onto his face.

    "And. . .?"

    "< Not to ever? >"

    "Yeah, but you did anyways. Hm . . . how can I trust you now?" Brendan asked with annoyance but had a hint of playfulness in it too.

    "< See, it wasn't my fault. . . >" Muddy tried to explain himself. "< It was. . . it was. . . Flare! The chicken did it! >" Muddy pointed an accusing paw at Flare, a Blaziken at least over six feet with red and orange feathers.

    Flare froze in her place for a second. "< Nuh uh! It was Skittles idea! >" she glanced at the cat Pokemon, a innocent smile on her face.

    Skittles, a Delcatty, shook her head. "< It would of been my idea if Sirius over here hasn't suggested it first! >" she smiled smugly at the Bite Pokemon.

    "< What?! It wasn't me! >" Sirius barked. "< It was. . . Silver! He's the guilty one! I knew he was always. . . buggy. . . >"

    "< No, really? You think? I'm not a cicada for nothing after all, >" Silver, a fast-paced Ninjask, replied sarcastically. "< It's not me Brendan! I'm the most trustworthy Pokemon on your team and you know it! Well maybe besides Alakazam. . . but still. . . would I ever betray you? >"

    "< Uh, duh! >" Muddy replied.

    "< Thunderbolt over there started it! He the perpetrator! >" Ninjask hissed.

    Thunderbolt, a Mantetric, glanced up from his sitting position, a bored look in his eyes. "< Why would I be interested in an old fart like Brendan? >" he asked dully.

    "< HEY! >" Brendan's Pokemon, except Alakazam shouted angrily.

    "< What its true! >" Thunderbolt concluded. "< And by the way its Sapphire's fault . . . she's the one who actually thought of it last night before we went to sleep- >"

    "< Nuh uh! >" Sapphire cried. "< I had nothing to do with this! It was . . . Banana! >" she stated, mouthing an apology.

    "< Ah ha! It is Sapphire! She mouthed a sorry! >" Thunderbolt exclaimed.

    "< Its not her fault, >" Banana, a Tropius, stated, her head hovering over the Tai's and Cherry's heads. "< It was those two over here. They convinced Alakazam to read your dream. >"

    Tai, a Swellow and Cherry, a Beautifly, looked at each other. "<I t was. . . HIM! >" the flew over to the lake and hovered over it until a massive shape began to emerge from the dark blue water.

    "< Fine! It was me! >" a Gyarados, also known as Hydro, stated. "< And I would of gotten away with it too if it weren't for you meddling Pok?mon! >"

    "< Uh, jinkies! >" Sapphire stated, alarmed, before diving under water to avoid the gigantic wave Hydro created when he went above surface.

    "< Zoinks . . . >" Flare groaned as the wave hit the Pok?mon on the land, "< just . . . zoinks . . . >"

    "< Oops, sorry . . . >" Hydro apologized.

    "Alakazam," Brendan stated, wringing the water out his bandana. "Why did you do what Hydro said? You usually don't listen to the other Pok?mon very often. . ."

    "<I was bored,>" Alakazam shrugged, "<and your dreams make very good soap operas. We can turn it into a T.V. show and call it Brendan: The Boy With No Brain!>"

    "Gee, I'm glad you find my life very entertaining to watch for your pleasure," Brendan said sarcastically, putting his soggy bandana back on top of his head.

    "< No problem, >" Muddy replied, a smile on his face. "< Were you being sarcastic? >"

    "< He may of evolved and gotten smarter but his old Marshstomp self is still in there. . . >" Flare sighed. "< Now we just gotta figured out where it is . . . >"

    "Figure out where what it?" someone asked from behind them.

    "< Hi May! >" Cherry greeted her trainer warmly. "< We were just talking about yo- >"

    "< Yoga, >" Muddy finished for Cherry. "< Yoga, very . . . Relaxing . . . >"

    "I'm sure it is," May smiled, rubbing the sleep out of her eyes. "Hey Brendan, were suppose to go to Wally's before nine remember?"

    "Yeah, yeah, I remember alright," Brendan grumbled, frowning at the sound of his long time rival's name. "Wally. . ." he spat out with disgust, "ugh, I can't believe I just said his name!"

    "< Did we somehow force you to say his name or something? >" Muddy questioned.

    "No but-"

    "Are you guys ready to go?" May interrupted Brendan. "Its already seven in the morning."

    "But its only a fifteen minute walk to Wally's," Brendan whined, "and I don't wanna see him when I don't have to yet! That wanna-be trainer! He gets all ticked off when I beat him in a battle. . . what's the score now? Oh yeah, ten to zero! Who rocks?"

    "< Not you apparently . . . >" Muddy muttered to himself.

    "< Well, he does have rocks for brains . . . >" Sirius pointed out.

    "< And he is hard-headed if you catch my drift . . . >" Silver remarked.

    ". . . some Pokemon Team I have . . ." Brendan murmured.

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    "Wally!" May cried out happily to a green-haired trainer dressed in a white tee and khaki-colored pants. She ran up to him and hugged the boy to death. The boy didn't seem to mind though; behind May's back he grinned evilly at Brendan.

    Brendan glared ice cold daggers back at the green-haired trainer and gave him the middle finger.

    "So May," Wally began, letting go of May reluctantly. "Oh, and 'Brandon.' " Wally 'accidently' said Brendan's name wrong. "How's the badges coming along? I've already got my fifth badge-"

    "Ha! We're already on our seventh! Beat that 'Wallace!' " Brendan also "accidently" mistook Wally's name, taunting him. "Guess we know who the better trainer is huh May?"

    May looked questioningly at Brendan. "Well maybe-"

    "Of course I'm the better trainer right May?" Wally asked, putting on his puppy eyes.

    "No, aren't I May?" Brendan too put on his puppy eyes.

    "Um . . ." May looked at the boy trainers and sighed. "I'm out of here!" she quickly ran into Wally's house, slamming the door behind her.

    Brendan and Wally blinked for a minute before starting at it again.

    "Look what you did Birch! You made May run away! I was this close too!"

    "You were close! HA! In your dreams Wanna-be!"

    "Can't you think of any better comebacks?!"

    "At least I can think!"

    "Loser!"

    "Butthole!"

    "Retard!"

    "Stupid!"

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    May sighed to herself, cuddling in her makeshift bed on the floor. Wally and Brendan were fast asleep, shifting and snoring. Reaching for her bag, she took out a small, red and black book. She nibbled on the eraser on her pencil, opened the book, took out a flashlight and began to write:

    9/28/03

    Dear Diary,

    Well, here I am, at Wally's again. Brendan and Wally were at it again. I wonder why . . . what's wrong with them? Is there a chip programmed in their brains so whenever they see one another, they go insane? I dunno but I'm completely clueless as you are . . .

    May turned off her flashlight and shoved her diary back into her bag. She smiled as she saw the two trainers sleep peacefully; the only time when their not at each others throats. She closed her eyes and fell into a deep slumber herself.

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    Well . . . there ya have it? *smacks forehead* Can't believe I wrote this thing . . . lol. I seriously hope that the other chapters are better than this but its up to you guys!

    Perhaps I should explain some things.

    Brendan and Wally (in my other fic which I should of posted first but whatever) are really big rivals since the two both think they like May. And even when they do realize that one (or both) don't like the girl trainer, they still hate each or dislike each other with a passion.

    Teh talking Pok?mon in the fic? Their also from my other story. You hear from them a lot in the very beginning but they shut up the rest of the time lol. Any other questions and I'll be happy to answer.

    LaTeR dAyZ!
     
    I think,it is cool and good fan fiction.
     
    I was wondering why those Pokemon never shut up XD Anyways... a Hoennshipping fic I see *hits self over head for stating blindingly obvious* XD It's good that Wally seems to be a rival of something at last. In the games, the idea of a protege seemed kinda weird, and Wally himself in the games was kinda weird (in my opinion), so it's good that you've changed the character around to suit the personality of the story.

    What I didn't like was how much those Pokemon spoke. They spoke for over half the chapter... but if you say they'll shut up - then they'd better XD Also, towards the beginning, you used some words that kinda destroyed the mood a bit. By saying twinkled, it gave the impression of night (and not day). There were others, but that one was the main example really. Choices of words can really affect a fic.

    I'm not ahuge fan of shipping fics, but this one seems a bit different to the others I've seen, so keep up the good work. ^_^
     
    *shrugs to herself* Meh, decided to revive this fic again in case you somewhat confused on the plot on Realizing Fate (this is the prequel if ya didn't know :P ). While the detail and description is possibly the crappiest I've ever done and I was too into making the characters' personalities shine instead of work on my grammar, I think that plots is a so-so which I'm actually kind of proud of.

    Yeah, I'm ranting, I'm surprised you made it this far. =P So hopefully it gets better. Enjoy! ^_^
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    Chapter 2:

    The sun peaked over the rolling green hills of Veranturf town as the boy slipped his hand into her's, a comforting smile on his face. She planted a very chaste kiss on his cheek, yet the boy felt like it was special, unique just for him. The girl smiled warmly, her hair being teased by the northwestern winds, giving her the scent of sweet grass to go with her smell of jasmine. A lingering smirk was held in the young girl's eye as she pushed the boy over and then . . .

    "MAY! Look at this!" Brendan shouted excitedly, pulling the poor girl out of her slumber. It was seven in the morning and we all know how much most girls love their beauty sleep so combine that with May's somewhat pissy mood every now and then and what do you get?

    "BRENDAN BIRCH! If you ever wake me up at seven in the morning every again with no important reason what-so-ever, I swear I'll sick my Blaziken on you and make her use Sky Uppercut to send you to planet Kafloogah! Got that?!"

    "You heard the lady Birch, shut the heck up!" Wally agreed from his bed, throwing his extra pillow at Brendan's head. "Normal people are trying to sleep here!"

    "Then why are you still asleep?" Brendan asked curiously, throwing Wally's pillow over his shoulder. "Normal people don't have green hair ya know?"

    "Not many people have white hair either Brendan," May pointed out, blinking back sleep from her eyes.

    "Hey, we all live in a Pok?mon World . . ." Brendan shrugged, sweeping a hand through his tousled hair. "Isn't that a song?"

    "Pok?mon . . . I wanna be the greatest master of them all . . ." Wally snorted, turning the other way, cuddling with a pillow.

    And then, there was silence . . .

    "The greatest master!" Wally finished, jolting Brendan and May out of their thoughts.

    "Freak . . ." Brendan murmured.

    And yet more silence . . .

    "Put my challenges to the test to be better than all the rest!"

    Brendan and May look at each other and sweat-dropped.

    "So you wanna be the master of Pok?mon?"

    "Um . . . Brendan? He's scaring me . . ." May whimpered.

    "Do you have the skills to be number- hey! What gives Brandon?" Wally awoke only to find Brendan trying to shove half his pillow up his mouth.

    "The name is Brendan okay? You were singing the theme to the Pok?mon television show idiot! Do you know how annoying that is?!" Brendan screeched in his ear.

    "Was it the one where Tracey was in it and Brock wasn't?"

    "Yeah . . ."

    "Then I see how it was annoying . . ."

    "Now that were all up, why don't you tell us what you wanted to show us now B Boy?" May asked curiously. "You know . . . Now that I'm up thanks to you . . ." a mischievous glint passed through May's eyes.

    "Haha, yeah," Brendan sweat-dropped, moving away from May to avoid getting pummeled into the ground. "You know, I rather not say right now."

    "Tell me," she growled.

    "Nah, its ok . . ."

    "Tell me."

    "You know, I'm not really in the mood at the moment . . ."

    "Tell me!"

    "Aw, do I have to?"

    "TELL ME NOW!" May jumped on his back, causing Brendan to topple over onto his stomach. May pressed down on the back of Brendan's head.

    "Watch the nose, watch the nose!" he yelled, muffled by the wooden floorboards. "I kinda need that to breathe- okay, push even further down, that's good."

    "Look. What. I. Have. To. Do. Just. To. Get. Some. Answers. Out. Of. This. Boy's. Mouth!" May sat on Brendan's back, trying to bore a hole in the ground using his face. Finally, satisfied with her results, she got off of Brendan's back. An apologetic smile crept onto her face. "I am sooooooo sorry . . ."

    "What?" Brendan sat up, looked around, puzzled.

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    Brendan kept rubbing his ruby-red nose in a frustrating manner, giving May dark glances every minute. The three trainers were just outside of Mauville, ready to train their Pokemon and to visit some of their friends.

    "Hey, look at things this way, at least it wasn't your you-know-whats!" Wally laughed, clutching his stomach. "I thought you were Santa because of your white hair but now your Ruldolph! Ruldolph the red-nose reindeer! Had a very shiny nose! And if you ever saw it, you can even say it glows! All of the other reindeer, use to laugh and call him names-"

    "Hey! There's a bunch of howling Mankeys outside!" someone yelled from outside of his window.

    Wally frowned, May sweat-dropped, but Brendan on the other hand. . .

    "HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Howling Mankeys! Sounds like a rock band! Named after Wally, the worst singer in the world! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"

    "Hey, what's this?" May ripped down a blue sheet on the Mauville bulletin board. "Attention all Pok?mon Trainers! The annual, year-round Po?emon Fair will be held in Mauville this year! Food, fun, and . . . another word that starts with F . . ."

    "Catchy . . ." Brendan murmured, starting to rub his nose again.

    "Fantastic, freaky, furnish?" Wally suggested.

    "That has nothing to do with the sentence but moving on . . ." May began to read again, "Starts on the second week of October, ends until the beginning of the third week."

    "They could make things less complicated by saying October fifth to October twelfth," Brendan commented.

    "Or better yet the fifth to the twelfth!" Wally proposed.

    "Yeah . . . um . . ." May shrugged and read the rest of the ad. "So be there and be-"

    "Dead?" Brendan answered.

    "Square?" Wally replied.

    "Gone?"

    "Stupid?"

    "Be there and be happy," May answered for them. "Latias, how lame . . . but yes, the ad. The last night of the fair will be formal, for food, for fun, and for something else that starts with a F . . . who knows what will happen . . . what does it mean by that?"

    Wally and Brendan began to smirk uncontrollably as plans began to form in their heads.

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    *smacks forehead* Well, I'm glad to see you beared with me. ^^;

    LaTeR dAyZ!
     
    Me: Good fic Breeze!
    Espeon: I agree!

    Anyway description is great. I just finished reading rest of the chapter in this story frm serebii. Length is great too. Anyway keep it up!
     
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