MCD's Anthology of Poems

Mr Cat Dog said:
Yay! Two in a row! Two in a row! XD Inspiration has come down like a bolt of lightning.(OK, crap simile :P) Anyways, just be grateful and whatnot ^_^ Remember the 3 'R's everyone XD Enjoy:

Leagues of Love

He stood there, breathless and
Taken aback. Who was this
Goddess that stood there before him?
Her hair flowed like the wind. Her
Eyes, so soft and gentle. Her face:
So pure. So perfect. So anglelic.
She turned around and took a
Glance. His Aphrodite smiled briefly,
and walked straight past.
But who was he kidding?
She was way out of his league.

As she walked passed, she
Couldn't help thinking about him.
His sweet smile as she gave him
A cheesy grin. His soft golden
Hair. His eyes, so soothing and
Gentle. His face: So clear. So shimmering.
So radiant. He had enguled her
Mind with a simple smile.
But who was she kidding?
He was way out of her league.

OK, first off, it's time for spelling errors!! XD

anglelic = angelic
enguled = engulfed

Wootness, now that that's over, time to reveal the poetry behind the words! XD

OK, well, this poem stimulates how people often think. "I'm way out of her league" or "She's way out of my league" this isn't how people should think. Love is love, which means it knows no boundaries. There's no such thing as someone not deserving another when love is the case.

It seems as though the girl in this poem has some feelings for the guy in the poem anyway. Tsk tsk tsk...men are so oblivious sometimes. XD Well, love, as I said, knows no boundaries. No amount of chains or force fields can possibly constrict this emotion from reaching its destiny.

And MCD, another great poem. And lookie in my siggie! I did as you asked and I am spreading the word. ^_~
(Also, if your poem has yet another crazy inner meaning, I haven't found it yet XD)

~Kelsey
 
Crap! Stupid Word! *Kicks computer* I'll fix those. But thankies for your lovely review, and hopefully more people shall come view this page. Lookie at my siggie as well ^_~ *Goes off to fix spelling mistakes*
 
Awwwwwwws!! <3<3<3<3 That's so sweet! (not the kicking your computer part, the siggie part XD) Don't worry, Word cannot be trusted sometimes. XD But your poems are great anyways. I know you didn't mean to put the spelling mistakes there anyhow. XD Keep writing those poem while your inspiration keeps going! ^o^

~Kelsey
 
Time for another poem ^_^ I won't ramble, so just read and enjoy:

Shutting Down

The old hag's face was enough
To wipe away any tears caused
By the occasion. Men and women
In coats of white, ironic to the
Situation, sighed, and lay a somewhat
Soothing blanket over her withered
And frail body. The last thing she would
Feel.

Her children watched, seemingly emotionless,
As they could only listen to the sharp,
Painful sounds of the screen by their
Mother's side. As the youngest, Alice,
Finally stifled a tear, it trickled down her
Jet black dress, and onto the floor.
The other two simply said and did
Nothing. They felt it was wrong to show
Emotion on times like these. But no matter
How macho they were, they too started to
Weep with their sister.

The dreaded moment had come. The doctor
Removed the mask that was the only
Thing keeping her alive. In a final
Farewell, she held out her hand.
Alice came to hold it, but by the time
She held her mother's in her own,
The beeping had
Stopped.
 
That was somewhat the telling of someone's life good.
 
Mr Cat Dog said:
Time for another poem ^_^ I won't ramble, so just read and enjoy:

Shutting Down

The old hag's face was enough
To wipe away any tears caused
By the occasion. Men and women
In coats of white, ironic to the
Situation, sighed, and lay a somewhat
Soothing blanket over her withered
And frail body. The last thing she would
Feel.

Her children watched, seemingly emotionless,
As they could only listen to the sharp,
Painful sounds of the screen by their
Mother's side. As the youngest, Alice,
Finally stifled a tear, it trickled down her
Jet black dress, and onto the floor.
The other two simply said and did
Nothing. They felt it was wrong to show
Emotion on times like these. But no matter
How macho they were, they too started to
Weep with their sister.

The dreaded moment had come. The doctor
Removed the mask that was the only
Thing keeping her alive. In a final
Farewell, she held out her hand.
Alice came to hold it, but by the time
She held her mother's in her own,
The beeping had
Stopped.

Awwwws!! That's one's so sad. ;-; I had a strong emotion felt for Alice. For she was so sweet, and seemed to love her mother dearly, I just felt so bad. ;-; This poem was really well writen. It shows what the final moments of life are like sometimes. Surrounded by those you love, yet it will be the ;ast time you ever see them. I saw one part that bothered me a bit:
"Painful sounds of the screen" did you mean the beeping sounds that the monitor made? Or did you mean for 'screen' to be 'screams'? ^^

Well, that poem was really good! I can't wait for the next one. ^^ *glomps MCD*

~Kelsey
 
No, the life support monitor thingy... so yes I meant screen. The old hag wasn't screaming or anything. XD
 
XDXD That's what I thought at first, just wanted to be sure. XD Nice poem, as I have said a thousand times over, but it's true! ^o^

~Kelsey
 
Hi avid readers ^_^ Here is a much more darker poem by yours truly, and it's also my longest one as well. You know the rest, so enjoy ^_^

Hostage

The man simply looked at the weapon
He held in his right hand. Awash with
Rage and anger, he thrust it into his
Wrist, only to miss and stab the table.

He yanked the knife out of the wood
And tried again. But, again, he missed
And stabbed the table for a second
Time. Why could he not do it?

Blood was still on his hands, as well
As the rest of his body. The corpse
Was stashed under the table, groaning.
He gave it a kick. That should have

Stopped it. For good this time. The
Sirens still were still sounding at full
blast. With the continuous, monotonous
flashing of red and blue lights.

He knew he was surrounded. If he
Escaped... but escaping was out of
The question. If only he could find
His precious Jesebelle. Where was she?

He searched through his drawers, his
cupboards, the pantry, behind the
Television, underneath the couch,
On the bed, under the bed. Of course!

He clambered under his bed to retrieve
His sweet Jesebelle. He cocked her and
put her to his temple. His finger reached
For the trigger. But he couldn't. Again.

The girl was shaking, petrified for what
Might happen. Would it be tablets, or
Maybe another fit of rage, or maybe he
Would rape her again, and feel more and

More pleasure. She lay in the closet,
Blind by the gloomy darkness, stung
From the rope around her wrists and
Ankles. But then, footsteps approaching.

The teenager screamed as the door
Opened. He grabbed her and threw
Her on the floor. She expected the
Worst, but not what did happen.

He lunged for her, but not to attack
With vicious rage, but to untie her
From her shackles. Once he had finished,
He simply whispered to her: "Run".

As she fled for her life. He too walked
Almost casually to the door, gently
closed it, and made his way downstairs
To the flashing red and blue lights.

The judge in court only gave him
Fifteen years, due to the fact that
He forgot to take the red and blue pills.
Although it might have been no years,

If he had just pulled the trigger.
 
That was a long poem and that was Dark.
 
Love is Conflict

I wake, weary and almost delirious.
I find myself confined, trapped, but
Strangely happy. Simply lying in the
Pool of love, yet with a chain clasped
Around my waist and abdomen. I sit
And swim in bliss and ecstasy. But
Then it happened. The plughole opened
And all came gushing. My Prison caved
In and Out. My chain was being pulled and
Yanked. I kicked and screamed and
Wailed and cried, and yelled and tried
To say:
"Why aren't you letting me stay?"

Yet, I remember little of those fragile
Days. But the situation remains the same.
I still lie in your pool of love. The chain has
Gone, but the emotion still remains from our
First struggle to keep ourselves as one.
Now the fight has turned upon itself.
Why can't I see my friends? Why not?
Please stop yanking my chain. Please!
I kick and scream and wail and cry and try
To say:
"Why aren't you letting me go?"
I adore this poem..i've been there, on both sides. You've captured it extremely well, MCD ^^
 
Hi peeps and peepettes again. ^_^ Here's another long (but not so dark) poem from yours truly. Enjoy:

The Long Fight

The lone warrior could somehow sense
Divine forces telling him he was at least
Half-way through this cesspit of fire and
Brimstone. He read the tattered map, filled
With gothic text and pictures of weird, but
Not so wonderful, places, before continuing
On through the door he had unlocked only a
Few moments ago.

This room felt different than the last. Instead
Of fiery pools of lava and never ending caverns,
There was simply a large door, and ornate decor.
Whilst it felt quaint, he knew that always meant
Something sinister. Still, he casually walked
Towards the door. But it came to no surprise that
A golden lock wrapped itself around the wood and
Almost grinned at him.

More midgets with their horns cocked and ready to
Fire came at the lone warrior with gargantuan
Force. These were nothing new, and he gave them
More hell than he had when he first met them.
Swords slashed, horns locked, teeth bit, feet
Kicked. But, still more and more came to have at
Him. Quickly, he took out a baton and waved it
Into the air, sending out a magical stream of both
Fire and Ice. As quickly as the beasts came, they
Simply disintegrated into the earth, their spirits
Rising. As luck would have it, the fire also lit the
Torches, hidden at first from view, that were
Placed around, the hall, and scented it
With a fragrance, so soothing, that it made the
Warrior feel healthier. But the golden lock snarled
As it removed itself from the door, bitter in its
Defeat. The lone warrior braced himself, then
Walked through the wood.

Silence, or so he thought, in a room more
Familiar to him than the previous. The pits
Of lava were back, as too were the caverns.
But what was this gargantuan in the centre?
The warrior jabbed it with his sword, and it
Awoke with such spirit it would have scared
Anyone who came near it. But not this warrior.
He smirked and lept straight into battle,
Pummeling it with sword-thrusting action. It
moaned and groaned, but still stood strong.
It too then lunged for him with scythes so
Thick and powerful, that they would easily
Chop the head off a stone statue. But it was
Too slow, and it stabbed the fiery lava, and
Shot up with burning pain. The warrior then
Took out his baton, and waved it, majestically,
And more fire and ice came out and thrust
Themselves on the beast, eating at its life
Until there was nothing left. The warrior simply
Waited. When all was done, the beast collapsed
And magically disappeared, revealing a piece of
Pink spongy material.

The Divine forces whispered: "Now onto Level 2!"
 
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That's interseting.You could make these poems into a book.
 
Well, they sort of are a book, each thread being a book in its own right.... OK, I'm getting carried away with my metaphors. XD But thanks for reading again ^_^
 
You're welcome I am a fan of potery.Espacilly dark.I like the dark.
 
I've been reading your poetry, and it really is great XD. So far my favourite is, the last one you posted "The Long Fight", it deals with elements of a narritive poem, but having a fan-fiction feeling to it as well, especially with the ending.

All I can say is, keep writing that poetry you have a talent for it ^^.
 
I liked the twist at the end of: 'The Long Fight' :P But thankies anyways LT ^_^ There should be another one tonight if I don't get much homework

(Looks around for Kelsey.... Where are you? o.o)
 
Mr Cat Dog said:
Hi avid readers ^_^ Here is a much more darker poem by yours truly, and it's also my longest one as well. You know the rest, so enjoy ^_^

Hostage

The man simply looked at the weapon
He held in his right hand. Awash with
Rage and anger, he thrust it into his
Wrist, only to miss and stab the table.

He yanked the knife out of the wood
And tried again. But, again, he missed
And stabbed the table for a second
Time. Why could he not do it?

Blood was still on his hands, as well
As the rest of his body. The corpse
Was stashed under the table, groaning.
He gave it a kick. That should have

Stopped it. For good this time. The
Sirens still were still sounding at full
blast. With the continuous, monotonous
flashing of red and blue lights.

He knew he was surrounded. If he
Escaped... but escaping was out of
The question. If only he could find
His precious Jesebelle. Where was she?

He searched through his drawers, his
cupboards, the pantry, behind the
Television, underneath the couch,
On the bed, under the bed. Of course!

He clambered under his bed to retrieve
His sweet Jesebelle. He cocked her and
put her to his temple. His finger reached
For the trigger. But he couldn't. Again.

The girl was shaking, petrified for what
Might happen. Would it be tablets, or
Maybe another fit of rage, or maybe he
Would rape her again, and feel more and

More pleasure. She lay in the closet,
Blind by the gloomy darkness, stung
From the rope around her wrists and
Ankles. But then, footsteps approaching.

The teenager screamed as the door
Opened. He grabbed her and threw
Her on the floor. She expected the
Worst, but not what did happen.

He lunged for her, but not to attack
With vicious rage, but to untie her
From her shackles. Once he had finished,
He simply whispered to her: "Run".

As she fled for her life. He too walked
Almost casually to the door, gently
closed it, and made his way downstairs
To the flashing red and blue lights.

The judge in court only gave him
Fifteen years, due to the fact that
He forgot to take the red and blue pills.
Although it might have been no years,

If he had just pulled the trigger.

Awwwwwwwws, I felt somewhat sorry for the man with the gun. Though he held the girl hostage, he still had a little bit of compassion and set her free. But that could be because he didn't want to go back to jail, or he was about to kill himself and end his life right there.

I liked this one a lot MCD, and I liked how he named his gun Jesebelle. XDXD
*glomps* Keep writing those shweet poems. ^^

~Kelsey


(PS- Sorry it took me so long to get here. XD I'll read and rate "The Long Flight" in a second. ^^)

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Mr Cat Dog said:
The Long Fight

The lone warrior could somehow sense
Divine forces telling him he was at least
Half-way through this cesspit of fire and
Brimstone. He read the tattered map, filled
With gothic text and pictures of weird, but
Not so wonderful, places, before continuing
On through the door he had unlocked only a
Few moments ago.

This room felt different than the last. Instead
Of fiery pools of lava and never ending caverns,
There was simply a large door, and ornate decor.
Whilst it felt quaint, he knew that always meant
Something sinister. Still, he casually walked
Towards the door. But it came to no surprise that
A golden lock wrapped itself around the wood and
Almost grinned at him.

More midgets with their horns cocked and ready to
Fire came at the lone warrior with gargantuan
Force. These were nothing new, and he gave them
More hell than he had when he first met them.
Swords slashed, horns locked, teeth bit, feet
Kicked. But, still more and more came to have at
Him. Quickly, he took out a baton and waved it
Into the air, sending out a magical stream of both
Fire and Ice. As quickly as the beast came, they
Simply disintegrated into the earth, their spirits
Rising. As luck would have it, the fire also lit the
Torches, hidden at first from view, that were
Placed around, the hall, and scented it
With a fragrance, so soothing, that it made the
Warrior feel healthier. But the golden lock snarled
As it removed itself from the door, bitter in its
Defeat. The lone warrior braced himself, then
Walked through the wood.

Silence, or so he thought, in a room more
Familiar to him than the previous. The pits
Of lava were back, as too were the caverns.
But what was this gargantuan in the centre?
The warrior jabbed it with his sword, and it
Awoke with such spirit it would have scared
Anyone who came near it. But not this warrior.
He smirked and lept straight into battle,
Pummeling it with sword-thrusting action. It
moaned and groaned, but still stood strong.
It too then lunged for him with scythes so
Thick and powerful, that they would easily
Chop the head of a stone statue. But it was
Too slow, and it stabbed the fiery lava, and
Shot up with burning pain. The warrior then
Took out his baton, and waved it, majestically,
And more fire and ice came out and thrust
Themselves on the beast, eating at its life
Until there was nothing left. The warrior simply
Waited. When all was done, the beast collapsed
And magically disappeared, revealing a piece of
Pink spongy material.

The Divine forces whispered: "Now onto Level 2!"

Weeeeeeeee, this one was awsome! I pictured the warrior as an adult Link from the Legend of Zelda. I thought of him fighting Dragon on Mt. Doom. ^_____^

Anyways, first, teh spelling errors. XD
"Quickly, he took out a baton and waved it
Into the air, sending out a magical stream of both
Fire and Ice. As quickly as the beast came..." 'Beast' should be 'beasts', seing as you are refering to multiple horned creatures attacking the warrior.

"Chop the head of a stone statue..." 'Of' should be 'off'. XD But those are the only mistakes, and not to mention minor ones. ^____^

I thought it was a neat twist on how it said "Onto level Two" at the end. XD It makes it seem even more like the Legend of Zelda, one of my favorite games. <3 Awsome job yet again MCD! ^o^

~Kelsey
 
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