[Showcase] Milkacrea Sprites

[jacktheking]

Hello all,

I'm inTech and I am developing a monster-themed game (Milkacrea). I have drawn some sprites for my game. However, I'm not very sure about my 'skill'.
Do give me some feedback..

If any of you are interested to join Milkacrea as spriters, feel free to PM me.

 

[faf]

Howdy!
Your concepts are really cute and colourful; normally monsters tend to look fierce but they don't have to be all the time. Some feedback:

• I'm noticing there are some white spots left on the monster's body; after scratching I strongly recommend zooming in on your sprite and filling them in.
• I don't know your program but if you are using Paint (for example) then the paintbrush tool should be mothballed since the colouring leaves the edges from the brush different coloured pixels when filled. If you need to block out an area and/or scratch the outline then the Pencil tool is the best tool to use.
• Speaking of blocking, you can use highlights and shading to add more depth to your pixels. Sprites with no shading tend to look a bit flat.
• I also recommend thinning your outlines, like here for example.

Hope this helps and good luck!

 

[jacktheking]

Alright, thanks for the feedback. I will be looking for white spot and filling in them.
Umm.. I'm using Paint.net and.. to be honest, I dont understand some of the words you used in comments two and three (edges, block out and scratch).

I will be looking for way to thin my outlines. I agree that the outline is too thick.

Once again, thanks.

 

[jacktheking]

Updated first post with new Milkacreas!:)
I think (well.. :o) I have improved since my I started spiriting..

 

[jacktheking]

Updated first post with new Milkacreas!:)
I think (well.. :o) I have improved since my I started spiriting..

 

[jacktheking]

Put them together into one big art.. Added in five more Milkacreas.

 

[Gigadweeb]

Hmm, dude. May wanna cut down on the thick outlines, jaggies and inconsistent viewing angles...