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Missing Number (version 2.0)

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GodofPH

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    OKay, I had an RP entitled Unknown #, but I literally lost control over it due to bad RPers screwing up my plot. So I'm hoping to repost it, this time I'll be more selective about who I admit in.

    Cinnabar Island

    The waves brushed gently against the beach sand on Cinnabar Beach while children frolicked on the shores and adults sunbathed. The sun was gently shining upon the beach as ships carrying tourists and cargo docked further south. The chirps of wingulls resting upon the pier formed an oceanic symphony with the sound of incoming tide and incoherent voices of people talking. Beached tentacools found up and down the beach were being examined by curious children. A wailord occaisonally breached the surface and sprayed a jet of water from its blowhole. Krabbys dug out of their burrows in the sand and fled for the water with obnoxious children tailing it. A mantine swam under the pier while tourists on the pier watched with awe.

    A Blastoise came into view, heading towards the beach. As the Blastoise came closer, a person could be seen atop the mighty turtle's shell. The Blastoise came ahsore and the trainer, a male with black hair wearing a red T-Shirt and blue jeans, stepped off of the Blastoise's shell and said, "We're here, thanks for the lift Gam." The Blastoise grunted and nodded to its trainer. The trainer recalled the Blastoise and started walking towards the pokemon center.

    He walked through the automatic doors and grabbed a tray. He placed his 6 pokeballs on the tray and gave it to the local Nurse Joy. He sat on a couch and waited for his pokemon to be healed. The trainer was thinking to himself, Good, now I can get my sixth Kanto badge. Gam is a capable water pokemon. He should be able to take out Blaine's fire pokemon easily. I won't even need Boom...

    A chansey walked out from behind the nurse's counter, carrying the tray that held the trainer's pokeballs. The Chansey smiled and said, "Channn-sey!" The trainer took the tray and thanked the Nurse.

    The trainer walked out of the pokemon center and hiked North to Cinnabar Island Gym. He reached a crimson red domed building with fire emblazoned on the walls. If this isn't the place, nowhere is. The trainer walked in through the doors and gazed upon a gym-floor held over a pool of magma by four chains staioned at each corner.

    The trainer called out, "Is anyone there?" A bald man wearing sunglasses stepped out from a door att the other side of the lava suspended stadium. The man said, "Hello, my name is Blaine. I lead this gym. I guess your here for a match." The trainer said, "Yes, my name is Pat. Lets do this." Blaine smiled and said, "I've got a tight schedule today, how about one-on-one?" Pat said, "Fine."

    Pat walked down onto the gym floor and faced Blaine on the other side. Blaine said, "Lets get this over with, go Ninetales." Blaine tossed a pokeball and his trusty ninetales appeared. It flickered its nine tales and snarled at Pat. Pat grabbed a pokeball from his bag and said, "Lets put this fire out, Gam, lets go." Pat threw Gam's pokeball and the Blastoise appeared and roared at the Ninetales.

    Pat yelled, "Gam, water gun!" Blastoise aimed one of its water cannons at Ninetales and shot a steady stream of water...but the ninetales bounded away and struck Gam in the skull with tackle. Gam didn't flinch, Blastoise skulls are extremely thick and hard. Gam ran at Ninetales and swung a fist at it. Ninetales again bounded out of the way and tried to bite Gam's other arm. Gam wasted no oppurtunity and grabbed Ninetales with his free arm.

    He was about to slam Ninetales onto the ground, but suddenly both of the pokemon froze and looked around. Gam dropped Ninetales and both of the pokemon ran toward the door of the gym. Pat and Blaine both recalled their pokemon.

    Pat walked outside and saw a huge flock of Wingfull flying toward Pallet Town. Krabbys were scuttling about the island, heading for the north shore. Beaches tentacools were trying desperately to get back into the ocean. Pokemon all over the island were going crazy.

    The western beach on Cinnabar Island was no longer a peaceful strip of paradise. The tide was bubbling fiercely and the water was turning a dar red color. Large groups of what looked like clouds rose to the surface. The clouds were a mix of tan, purple, and scarlet colors. The clouds floated above the water and flew towards the shore. One of the clouds swooped down and grabbed an unlucking tentacool. The cloud opened a hole in itself and gulped down the tentacool. More and more clouds were surfacing and heading towards the shore. Pat said, "Oh god."

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    RULES
    1. These rising things will try to eat your pokemon if not stopped. They must be battled.
    2.No catching one unless I authorise it.
    3. You can't just obliterate tem all with one big attack. They are attacking legions and will keep coming until the source is discovered and destroyed.
    4. Its best to stay in groups
    5. You must post a sample RP along with your profile.

    please post your trainer's

    Name
    Age
    Physcial Descrtption
    Pokemon: (up to 6, if you want to use a legend, PM me)
    Peronality/Battle Tactics:
    History: (just a bit of backstory behind your trainer)
    Sample RP: Can be your first post, mandatory

    Heres my trainer
    Pat
    age: 15
    Physical description: Medium length untended black hair, red T-Shirt. Cargo blue jeans.
    Pokemon: Blastoise (Gam), Machamp, Lugia (Boom), Seviper, Kadabra (Psy), Arsonist (Typhlosion)
    Personality: Reckless, battles recklessly
    History: A trainer aspiring to be league champ, is curretly battling through the gyms. He hopes to get out of the shadow of his Father and Mother and make a legend of his own.
    Sample RP: look at the huge backstory I made
     
    Name-Janelle Withe
    Age-14
    Physical Description-Janelle has long,blue hair which falls to her waist.She wears a plain black tank top and blue jeans.She has a brown sling bag to carry her possesions in.A belt to hold her pokeballs.Her eyes are of mysterious color,blood red.Because of this,the girl usually wears sunglasses over her eyes.Rarely taking them off.
    Pokemon-Gardevoir(Silen)*male*,Marshtomp(Crie)*male* and an Absol(Trinde)*male*
    Personality-Quiet,withdrawn but has a determined attitude.
    History-Janelle was consantly teased because of her eyes by her peers in the past causing the girl to withdraw from most people.She will speak when spoken to,but rarely speaks out of her own free will.She received her first pokemon,a Ralts when she was 6 years old.

    RP Sample-
    A girl stood alone in the outskirts of Lavender Town,behind her was a vast forest.The girl staring at the road which was before her,as if pondering over something.The clouds far in the North..they seemed to be of an odd sort of color..purple?Scarlet?
    Something was definately wrong,and this girl was not going to miss out on the action.
    Janelle brushed a few strands of blue hair out of her blood red eyes,taking a better look at the clouds.The Sun was begining to set,showing the end of yet another bleak day.
    The girl sighed before putting on a pair of sunglasses.

    She carried pokeballs on her belt,a bag at her side and nothing to accompany her on the long journey which lay ahead except for the wind.

    "Crash!"

    The girl swiftly spun around and was shocked to see that someone had followed her.It was her father,mother and their family Seviper.Its tail glinted menacingly in the light of the setting sun,it was the Seviper's tail,cutting down the trees which surronded the girl

    "There you are!Come back here right now!"her father ordered the girl.

    Janelle took a few steps back,not saying anything.

    "Now sweetie,you needn't be like this...we'll discuss this when we get back home."her mother talked in a somewhat pleading voice.

    The girl still maintained her silence,discussing was a definite no to the girl,they might have ended up sending her to one of those mental hospitals for all she knew.One hand slowly reaching for a pokeball on her belt.

    "Hey!What do you think you're doing young lady!!"her father shouted as an Absol appeared beside Janelle.

    "Please!Janelle,listen to your father!"

    The girl looked up to her mother,really looking at her.Her eyes were barely visible behind the black lenses of the glasses,but Janelle looked.For a moment,the girl seemed to look inside,through the mother's eyes,into her soul.The mother,she herself felt like she was looking into her daughter's soul.Leaving her speechless.

    The girl turned around so that her back was facing her parents,getting onto Trinde.

    "Seviper!Poi-"but before the man could finish his order,the woman standing beside him shook her head.

    "Let her go.We can't tell her what to do anymore.We should understand that."she finally understood,why their daughter had been like that all these years.She needed freedom,her own free will,to choose.
    Right or wrong.

    The father,looking at the sight that was unfolding infront of him.His daughter,was this the reason she had been acting the way over the past years.Reluctantly,he nodded his head.

    Janelle didn't need telling twice,she and Trinde ran off,into the inner parts of the forest.

    "Thank you.Father,mother.."the girl thanked them in her heart,a small smile appeared on her face.

    The girl and the Absol ran at breakneck speed.....


    Towards the strange colored clouds.

    OOc-
    Hope that the sample was good enough...X_X
     
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    That sample was great. Your accepted.
     
    Name: Callum
    Age: 14
    Appearence: Callum is quite tall and lanky for his age. He has quite short, spikey blonde hair, blue eyes, and a relatively thin face. He dresses in baggy clothes to try and counter his skinny build, and is normally seen wearing baggy skater-style combat pants and hawaiien shirts.
    Pokemon:
    Arcanine, female
    Golem, male
    Golduck, male
    Jumpluff, female
    Personality: slightly moronic and hyper at times, but can often be deadly serious. He has a high opinion of himself.
    History: Callum has tried living a settled life, in a variety of continents, but none of them seemed right. He has a bad case of wanderlust, and despite his nerdy appearence, he's one with nature and his pokemon

    RP Sample:
    Monday morning. The rain drummed down in heavy torrents, heavy grey clouds covered the sky, but New York was as busy and as bustling as ever. They city that never sleeps stops for no man, and certainly not for something as fickle and as meaningless as the weather.

    Sandra McRae sat despairingly inside her Porsche, eyeing her reflection in the mirror. Why she had agreed to come this far south, god only knew. Promoting her new book in the United States had never been a great idea. Like her tutor, had always said: ?If the book wants to sell, it?ll sell. If it doesn?t, there?s no use in promoting it.? Yet, as always, Sandra had been foolhardy, and she had dragged herself over a thousand miles out here for...what, nothing?
    {Cut from a project for english...}
     
    That RP sample is fine, your accepted Charon-chan.
     
    Yay!
    Pwhhhhhheeeeee!!!!*runs screaming around thread*

    Ahem..so we'll wait for more people to join before we start right?Oh,and my sample was my first post,I guess....
     
    Name: Randall
    Age: 17
    Physcial Descrtption:
    [PokeCommunity.com] Missing Number (version 2.0)

    Pokemon: Zapdos, Typhlosion, Umbreon, Sneasel, Gardevoir, and Grovyle
    Peronality/Battle Tactics: Attacks his opponents weakness.
    History: Grew up in Petalburg with his brother Pat. Got his Eevee at age 11 and has been training ever since. He has beaten all gym leaders in Hoenn and Johto.
     
    Ranson
    Age: 16
    Physcial Description: Ranson is pretty tall. He has brown spiked hair, a black bandana, red tee shirt, black jacket, camo jeans, and red and gray shoes.
    Pokemon: Swampert, Absol, Umbreon, Espeon, Swellow
    Peronality/Battle Tactics: Ranson is a cautious trainer and is aware of everything around him. Sometimes, he jumps to conclusions and that gets him in trouble. He tries to eliminate his opponents as quick as possible.
    History: Ranson started his journey in Littleroot Town. That is where he got his first pokemon, Mudkip. He trained and caught more pokemon and challenged gym leaders along the way. The battles weren't easy and they seemed hopeless. But he didn't give up and eventually beat them one by one. Since then, Ranson has been a traveler. He hasn't challenged the Elite Four even though he has all eight badges in the Hoenn region.
    Sample RP:

    Ranson was continuing his journey in Kanto. He was currently in Saffron City exploring. He saw the Saffron Gym but was in no interest for a gym battle just now. He looked to the left to see a somewhat smaller gym. He walked up and read the sign: Fighting Dojo.

    Ranson: Hmmm..let's give it a try.
    He walked inside. Everyone was a blackbelt kicking and punching with their pokemon. Ranson looked to his left to see one trainer with his Machoke.

    Blackbelt: Right! Left! Jab! Jab! Uppercut!
    As the blackbelt did this, his Machoke followed.

    As Ranson continued walking, a few trainers stared at him. He saw an older man than all the others and walked towards him. The elder was meditating.

    Ranson: Uh..pardon me, but..
    He paused as he saw one eye open. He continued.
    Ranson: ...are you the leader here?

    The elder opened his other eye and got up. He was about the same height as Ranson only a little shorter.
    Elder: Ah. Yes. Yes I am.
    The elder eyed Ranson curiously.
    Elder: And you are?

    Ranson: Uh. Ranson, from Rustboro City.

    Elder: Ah. You've come a long way you have. I guess you are here to challenge the Dojo?
    Ranson: Uh. Sure, I guess.
    Elder: Ah. Ok then, I'll bring you some of my other students first.

    He called over two blackbelts, including the one with the Machoke.
    Elder: You shall do battle with these two.
    Ranson: All right, bring it on.

    The blackbelt with the Machoke approached him. He was taller than Ranson by a few inches.
    Blackbelt: Hmm. This shouldn't take long...
    Ranson: Don't be too sure.

    The blackbelt took his side.

    Ranson: I'll be right back. Gotta put something away.
    Elder: Ah. That's fine.

    Ranson rushed out of the Dojo and took off his backpack. He took the gym badges from Hoenn and put them all in his backpack. He looked at the nearby forest. Something rustled in the bushes that caught his eye. A Rattata leaped out and was running as fast as it possibly could.

    Ranson: Heh. Just a Rattata.
    As he was turning, there were numerous rustles in the bushes. He turned around and numerous Pidgeys and Rattatas came out running and flying, as if trying to get away from something.
    Ranson: What the-?
    He stopped as the ground was shadowed. He looked up to see the clouds coming in.

    Ranson: That's funny, it wasn't cloudy a few minutes ago.

    His mind raced with questions and the clouds started coming into a purplish hue.
    Ranson: What's going on here?

    He looked back at the Rattata and Pidgey. it was like they were running from the clouds. Ranson had to find out more. He put on his backpack and dashed into a sprint after them. The elder popped his head out of the Dojo.

    Elder: What about the battles?!
    Ranson: It'll have to wait!
    He rushed into the forest after the pokemon.
    Blackbelt: Told ya it wouldn't take long.

    (Is this good enough?)
     
    Randall-Kun and Utter Disaster, your both accepted.
     
    Yay! All right! Now I guess we wait for more people.
     
    Yep, thats what we have to do....wait.
     
    I'll join! :D

    Name: Charlie Everheart
    Age: 14
    Physcial Description: Charlie has short light brown hair and sea-green eyes. She is fairly short for someone her age, only being about 4'7" and is usually seen in faded-out blue jeans, a dark blue tee shirt, extremely dirty tennis shoes and carries an old dark brown backpack that has a few stitches in the sides.
    Pokemon:
    Espeon- female
    Pikachu- female
    Vulpix- male
    Vaporeon- male
    Butterfree- female

    Peronality/Battle Tactics: Charlie is very curious and has that innocent look to her, even during battles. She's a very determined trainer who will battle with everything she's got, but her Pokemon's health are always on her mind.
    History: Charlie was born and raised in Pallet Town. That's where she was given a Eevee when she started on her journey. That Eevee later on evolved into an Espeon and usually walks next to Charlie outside its Pokeball.
    She loves traveling and takes her time as she passes through towns and cities.
    Sample RP:

    Charlie watched a small group of Eevee playing with a fallen apples from her perch on a tree branch. She was between Vermilion City and Fuchsia City and had decided to take a break when she spotted the Eevee playing. Espeon was also watching them with her head on Charlie's knee.

    Suddenly, the once bright and shinning Sun disappered. Espeon's ears twitched and raised her head alarmed. The Eevee had abandoned their apple and scampered off into the bushes.
    " What is it, Espeon?" Charlie asked.

    " Espe Es." said the Pokemon as she jumped from Charlie's lap to the lower branchs before softly landing on the ground below. Espeon looked around before taking off through some bushes.
    " Wait for me!" Charlie climbed down from the tree (being careful NOT to fall out of it) and started running after Espeon.
    Charlie stumbled over a fallen tree branch, but regained her footing and took off again.
    " Espeon!" she called. She came to a small clearing and saw Espeon standing just on the outside of it. The Pokemon was staring up at the sky with a frightened look on her face.

    Charlie looked up and was shocked to see odd colored clouds covering the sky above them.
    " What the-?" Charlie mumured. Espeon backed away and went behind Charlie, still staring at the sky.

    A Rattata and a Pidgey suddenly ran (and flew) out from the bushes, taking little notice of Charlie and Espeon as they fled away from the clouds. What the heck was going on?
     
    Well, It's not the best but your accepted. Though you forgot the " " the last time you talked. I will see if its enough to start!
     
    That last sentence was more of a thought than something she said. Sorry if its not very good, this is the first Pokemon RPG I've ever joined. :nervous:
     
    I guess thats enough to start. I deem this RP OPEN!
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    Pat threw a pokeball which unleashed his prize pokemon, Boom the Lugia. Pat said, "Boom, lets split!"

    Pat jumped on Boom's back. The Lugia began flapping its mighty white wings and lifted its colossal body off of the ground. The omnious black clouds floated toward Boom, hovering after him as the Lugia rose up into the air.

    Boom frowned and his eyes displayed a look of worry, it was as if he'd seen these things before. He opened his mouth and a yellow ball of light formed within the sqaure whose corner's were defined by his four fangs. The ball lunged forth and its shape became that of a beam.

    The yellow went through the clouds like a super-charged nailgun, only to have the clouds vaporize moments later. Pat thought to himself, I love Aeroblast...

    Boom's victory was short-lived however, Pat saw more clouds floating towards Boom. They seemed to be opening a mouth of some sort, showing the interior of their bodys which were colored with a light purple color.

    "Boom, pedal to the metal."

    I hope Randall is doing ok...
     
    Looking ot the sky I spotted a Lugia. "Pat, I knew you would be here!" I said running towared him then I spotted the vlouds forming around Lugia, "I don't think so!" I said pulling a pokeball form my pouch. "GO ZAPDOS!" I yelled as the beutiful yellow bird appeared from the ball. I hoped on his back and told it. "Get to Lugia! FAST!"
    The Bird took off with amazinng speed. "Now use thunderbolt on the clouds!" The charge from Zapdos was god like. It had learned not to shock me when I was on his back, some how he had sent the charge around me. It struck right in front of the cloud. "Nice hit!" I yelled as it vaporized.
     
    Pat wiped a bead of sweat from his forehead, a small bit of relief to see the second wave of clouds pursuing him vaporized by a familiar sight. His brother's Zapdos.

    Pat turned to Randall and said, "Hey bro, thanks for the cover."
     
    "No poblem Pat! Lets just get rid of these things! Go Gardevoir! Use psy beam on these things!" Zapdos moved towards Lugia and they looked at each other like they were scared. "Its almost like they know what these thigs are!"
     
    "Brother, I don't think senselessly blasting these things is the answer. We would be in over our heads before too long."

    Pat made a swift motion of his hand to Boom. The Lugia nodded his head. The black ridge's over Boom's eyes glowed a light blue for a moment. An energy barrier formed and encased the brothers within, protecting them from the clouds outside.

    "Now we can formulate a plan. Oh look, we left one alive."

    Pat gazed at the ground below. One of the clouds attacked by Zapdos was lying there, not dead but heavily stunned. Pat grabbed a pokeball out of his pack and dropped it on the ground. The pokeball opened and the cloud disappeared within it in a flash of red light. The Pokeball didn't wobble or jolt at all, the cloud gave no struggle.

    "Well, our little prisoner. What should we do with it Randall?"
     
    "Send it to Prof. Birch? Oak would be best! Send it to Oak!" I said watching it. "He can study it and determine what it is. The only thing we know is we can catch them so they must be pokemon!"
     
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