*OKay, well, the first thing that really jumped out at me was the back leg, the one thats lifted. It looks out of place, like it unbalances it. its not that its badly drawn or anything, it's just how tense and sturdy everything else on the monster is, i mean, the rest of the legs look locked into place and the hind one just seems to be randomly lifted. it just seems awkward. if i were you, i'd put it down on the floor with the rest. it'll make the monster more imposing and less prissy-looking, and keep it a bit more balanced overall.
Also, the foreleg that you drew slightly sideways needs a quick fix. it's nothing major but you have it horsey-legs, right? so the hoof and the fetlock are more directly aligned, that is; you've drawn the hoof almost horizontal to the fetlock, but it should be UNDER it, a little more. *so just hoick the hoof back a few millemeters under the leg would fix it... (but not RIGHT under... its hard to explain :s, its like you gave it a bit toooo much foot, you just need to reduce it?)
uuuh, i hope that makes sense :s
There seems to be a tad too much neck, or maybe not enough beef on the body, but maybe you designed it that way so i won't go into that too much. But i did notice the tail...
okay, that is a REALLY nicely designed tail and the little loop at the end is just DARLING<3! honestly, i DO love what you've done there but, the tail looks so fluid towards the end, but the middle part, it seems to ridgid. i'd reccommend just... loosening it a little, just take the stright part and make it a gently 'u' dip to just make it smoother and so it flows into that beautiful part at the end more easily. again, i hope you see what i mean, it doesn't have to be anything drastic here, but a little bit of work could make all the difference!
well, crits aside, i really do like this! it shows alot of skill in animal anatomy! the muscle formations and the knees are especially well done! I really like the three eyes,. you pulled that off spectacularly imho. Plus the design of the jaw is so bulky and nasty-looking, i mean, i wouldn't wanna get a bite from that thing! *not to mention how fast it looks like it could run. gack. talk about nightmare @A@!*
:3! dones finaly copy mean we get to see colours?! oh i really hope so! I'd love to see this in colour! <3!
keep up the great work! ¦)! *thumbsup*