Mokoki's Adventure

[Drageon]

[Chapter 1]
One morning in June, as Mokoki was geting out of bed. 2 sec. before his mother came in.

Mother: Raise'n Shine Dear.
Mokoki: It's 7:00am, mom, at least 5 more-
Mother: Aren't you going to start on your quest?...today...
Mokoki: yeah...*zzzzzzzzz*
Mother: (Asleep all ready?, wait! the alarm clock!!)
Mother: AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mokoki: Wait's happening!?!
*THUMP*
Mokoki: Mom? She fainted...
Shior: Hey, Mokoki! *Shouting from outside*
Shior: I need to give you something! *Still Shouting*
Mokoki: Be out there in a min.
Shior: Here.
*Mokoki Was Given PokeNav & PokeDex*
Mokoki: COOL!
Shior: By the way, why was your mom screaming?
Mokoki: She's scared of alarm clocks for some reason...

[Chapter 2]
Yes, Mokoki is now on he adventure. But, what's going to happen next?

Mokoki: *Sleeping on a nearby rock*
Trainer: *Walking and triping over Mokoki*
Mokoki: ...What happened...? *sleepy with some pain*
Trainer: You made me trip!
Mokoki: I thought you just triped over me?
Mokoki & Trainer: BLAH! BLAH! BLAH! BLAH! BLAH! BLAH! BLAH! BLAH!
Trainer: Aggg! Thats it! Get ready to battle!!
Mokoki: But, I don't have any pokemon yet.
Trainer: What? A Trainer without pokemon?
Trainer: Then here, take a few of these then.
*Mokoki was given 6 pokeballs*
Trainer: Oh, My name is Tyson.
Mokoki: My is Mokoki.
Tyson: Well hello Mokoki.
Mokoki: Aren't you still mad at me?
Tyson: nah, just a small cut.
Tyson: Hey, I hear something in that tall grass over there!
Mokoki: Pokeball Go!!
*CLANG*
Gardener: Hey you pesty kids get out of here! *Throws some Plants*
Tyson: Is that a PokeNav?
Mokoki: Yes it is and it says were allready in Dashville?
Tyson: *Look Round* We are in Dashville already?!

Will Be Update Later...

 

[Mr Cat Dog]

Meh... more scripts. Must be really popular here... Still - this doesn't give me much to rate, just plot... Well, at best - this is quite confusing. You have spelling and grammatical mistakes, and this is way too short. There's no description, but that's to be expected from a script fic. Meh... can't really say anything encouraging because I can't rate script fics very well... *sighs*

~ MCD

 

[Mew13]

Yeah, I'm not thrilled or hooked, which should probably happen within the 1st coupld of chapters. This script thing is confusing.... #_#