Monster Battles!

Do you Like My Monster Battles Comics?

  • They R-O-C-K!!!!!

    Votes: 2 11.1%

  • Theyre good!

    Votes: 1 5.6%

  • So so....

    Votes: 4 22.2%

  • Ummm... no

    Votes: 3 16.7%

  • Are they comics? if they are they suck

    Votes: 8 44.4%
  • Total voters
    18
  • Poll closed .

Omega Latios

Whhheeee... *shot'd*
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    Ok I know That these comics will suck but I post them anyway
    You can join to this comic,If you want join fill this
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    Charachter Name: Logan
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    Charachter monsters: Godzilla:
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    Ok you will be in next comic! Heres Part 3 woohoo! three in day! will there be more? let's see...
    Enjoy!
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    Somethings you really need to work on. Word bubbles are awful. Background stinks it looks like there just standing in a gray room with no floor. Don't use default paint colors. The monsters talking is kind of annoying. Did you even give credit to who made those sprites or did you just take them. But if you made them i'm sorry. Grammar needs major improvement. You are the weakest link, goodbye XD. But seriously your score comes to 0/10. Its not funny and some of the things don't make sense. I think you need to take the time to read a tutorial.
     
    Everything is awful,I woiuldnt even call this a comic :\ Most MSpiant made bg's suck which this one does,the bubbles suck,gah everything does,sorry. Anyway,you've clearly failed to make a good comic.
     
    Did you even give credit to who made those sprites or did you just take them.
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    There was no credit needed. but thanks to all though. i'll try harder next time!

    EDIT:Can someone give me cool backrounds? if you have some, Can you Pm them to me?
     
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    Like I said word bubbles still need work. Also its not good to mix bittages. It also looks like you stretched out the background. Grammar still needs work. But I guess it is a improvement :\.
     
    Its too large,your frames are too large. And you have spelling mistakes galore. And finally it needs more action theyre boring.
     
    Sorry to double post but heres Part 6# Enjoy!
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    BIG EDIT:I'm taking fan comics right now so if u have one feel free to Pm it to me
     
    Doesn't make a lot of sense, text bubbles are pretty bad, and some minor flaws. 6/10.
     
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