Monster Battles!

[Omega Latios]

Is there even somebody who likes my comics? I hope so...

 

[O]

You're comic a 2D environment. How can bats just swarm out from no where? I'm not going to say anything, but I don't like it at all. Read some tutorials. They help.

 

[Logmon1]

You're comic a 2D environment. How can bats just swarm out from no where? I'm not going to say anything, but I don't like it at all. Read some tutorials. They help.

Comics don't need logic dude.

 

[DarkPegasus]

Everything must have logic.I like the idea,but I don't like the message circles.

 

[Castrainer]

Somethings you really need to work on. Word bubbles are awful. Background stinks it looks like there just standing in a gray room with no floor. Don't use default paint colors. The monsters talking is kind of annoying. Did you even give credit to who made those sprites or did you just take them. But if you made them i'm sorry. Grammar needs major improvement. You are the weakest link, goodbye XD. But seriously your score comes to 0/10. Its not funny and some of the things don't make sense. I think you need to take the time to read a tutorial.

Read That post, End of the Case~

Really, improve a bit lot, read some tutorials, and make a script before~ Dotn go throwing lots of Sprites at a background blackboard...