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[NeoRyder]

forgive the lame title

check out ma cards, energies first

https://img152.imageshack.us/my.php?image=radiatehr0.png

(^yes i did see Radio active blanks on pokemon zeo, i thought it was a nice idea)

https://img152.imageshack.us/my.php?image=atomicenergycopyga4.png

https://img213.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lilantacopygh0.png

https://img146.imageshack.us/my.php?image=flarantcopyds5.png

feel free to criticize:), and credit goes to Fangking for the blanks as usual

Edit: On Atomic Energy it was meant to be '15 basic energy' not '15 special energy)

I'll fix it later.

 

[QFred]

Energy (the word) should be capitalized.

Anyways I really love the use you gave to the Radioactive Energies, and the +20 damage effect you gave the card. 10/10

Atomic Energy is also pretty cool, but the type symbols are very blurry... The effect is awesome, and by the time you have 15+ cards or your discard pile... You'll rock the field! 9/10

In Lilant, you the hell is the effect text gray??? I like the art and the attacks. "your", "deck" and "hand" should not be capitalized like in Lilant's Call Reinforcements. Also, in Desperate Attack, you should refer that the player must flip 3 coins. 6/10

In Flarant, again, the effect text is gray... In the Power, the first sentence should be: "Once during your turn (before your attack), you may draw 3 cards." And why did you put the Delta mark on the bug's picture. I like the attacks pretty much, anyways. 7,5/10

Overall: You are a good faker, you have the symbol and the placement. Now you must concentrate on a correct wording, and fix some details.

Also, I would like to see an card from Grubbot!

 

[NeoRyder]

aah, i knew something looked odd - :P Grey effect text

I'm not reely sure how it turned out grey...

O well, thanx QFred, i'll fix the cards soon, and grubbot is already in the making!!

But honestly i need serious help in what to capitalize, i actually haven't got a clue:embarrass

 

[QFred]

Pokémon Position (Active, Defending, Attacking or Benched), card type (Energy, Trainer, Supporter, ...), Pokémon names, Attack/Poké-Power/Poké-Body names...

There is not much on it...

Also, remember to start a sentence with a Capitalized word.