Mwar, I think I'll post this again?

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    Mwar, I posted this over a year ago [and never saw that anyone replied until recently 0.o] and figured I'd post it again. I'm almost spurred to write more, mwar, if I actually get off my duff and start using my brain again XD

    Anyyway, here's the old thread if anyone's interested [it was on page 18 of 20 o.0]
    https://www.pokecommunity.com/threads/10005
    And the poem again, mwar:


    All around us, everything we see,
    All that we smell, touch and say,
    All that we are, all we can be,
    Every change we make, each brick that we lay,

    Where are they? Where are we?
    Where is the Reality we so greatly seek?
    Will we find it in life? In you or me?
    Nay, the Illusions, their influence is at its peak.

    The Illusions are what we see,
    What we smell, touch and say,
    The Illusions control you and me,
    So skillfully keeping Reality at bay.

    So what are we then? Are we just slaves,
    To the Illusions, which warp our perceptions?
    From them, is it possible to be saved?
    From their influence, are there any exceptions?

    How deep do the Illusions extend?
    Is it real air that we breathe?
    Is it real fabric that we mend?
    Is it real dust that causes us to sneeze?

    How do we know Reality isn?t the Matrix,
    Where our whole life is just an Illusion,
    And we?re just batteries? What awful tricks.
    Tricks that are played behind a mask of Illusion.

    We live in the Illusions? world,
    We cannot tell the difference,
    Between the Illusions and the real world,
    With Reality?s death; Illusions reigning ever since.

    Coming to a close, the poem to an end,
    Is there anything to break my fall?
    Left alone, for myself I must fend.
    But really, have I ever written this poem at all?





    ^_^ Enjoy, mwar.
     
    That's a pretty good poem Pory. I like it. I suck at being a critic so I'll leave that to the critics. XD

    8/10 is what I give it. ^^
     
    Yayness! Porygon's posted a poem. <3~~~ This poem was very well written. I can most certainly tell you took your time with it. ^______^ This poem kind of shows us what we shouldn't take anything in life for granted. We should always be living life to its fullest and enjoying every positive moment of life. ^^

    It also shows the simple pleasures of life by using our senses. We smell the sweet blooming flowers of spring, and touch the petals of soft rose buds. It's a very friendly and happy poem. ^^

    Awsome work Porygon! Me = loves it. XD *stamps the "Kelsey Seal of Approval" on Pory's poem* =3

    ~Kelsey
     
    W00t!! 10/10 Great stuff and a nice end to it too!! XD
    We all ask ourselves these questions at some point in life *sigh* such mysteries make life more interesting and worth living. XD
     
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