my art

dodobird

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    this is my art i suppose its ok for a beginner(soz about charmeleon i tried to make it bigger but it went wrong)
     
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    the first one on the left is my favorite! So ill crit there~<3
    hmm very nice expression and complimenting pose with that, it works very well! Only some bits are a tad off, for example, the head shape is a bit messy, the nose seems at a different perspective from the rest, with only one nostril showing, liek it was a side view, bu the rest is almost at a 1/4 top veiw, plus the back of the head is dead flat, though it still smees t work being flat so yeah ^^' hahaha! the leaf on his head is a little scruffy, its a bit rough, wobbles about a bit, mebbe try one smooooth line~<3 that'd look even more awesome ^^<3
    besides those little niggles, its preeettty sweet, i LOVE the arms O_O' i'd flip sky-high if i drew arms as good as that EVER O_O! overall, if you neaten out the perspective and a bit of anatomy issues, that would be one ockin pic 8D! huzzah! KUDOS! ^_^~
     
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