My Competetive Team Part 2

[Anti]

Thanks for the help in the last thread everyone! Here's my somewhat ravamped team:

Umbreon@Leftovers
Bold Nature
EVs: 252 HP, 150 Defense, 108 Special Defense
~Confuse Ray
~Toxic
~Moonlight/wish
~Mean look

Tank Umbreon has great Defenses and HP to destroy everything except nasty fighting types (namely heracross). I hope this can work, but I think it can.

Scizor@White Herb/Quick Claw
Jolly Nature
EVs: 252 Speed, 252 Special Defense, 6 Attack
~Agility/Iron Defense
~Swords Dance
~Baton Pass
~Silver Wind

My BPer could give my team amazing speed with agility or some backbone w/ iron defense. Swords dance is for gengar and charizard and silver wind for my attack and it can raise all stats, making it a good BPer.

Kingdra@Chesto Berry/king's rock
Modest Nature
EVs: 252 HP, 130 Defense, 128 Special Defense
~Toxic/Attract
~Surf
~Twister/Dragonbreath
~Rest

Kingdra is my annoyer of darkness. I could go w/ haxflinch w/ twister, toxic, and king's rock or achesto berry w/ toxic and Dbreath. This could be a flop or a powerhouse.

Electabuzz@Brightpowder
Modest Nature
EVs: 252 Special Attack, 252 Speed, 6 HP
~Thunderbolt
~Psychic/substitute
~Ice Punch
~Fire Punch

This is self-explanatory. Use whatever hits the hardest. Ice Punch covers its only weakness-ground. Its achilles heel is its poor D, but he could be dangerous.

Charizard@Choice Band
Adamant Nature
EVs: 252 Attack, 252 Speed, 6 HP
~Earthquake
~Aerial Ace
~Rock Slide
~Brick Break

3 swords dances and agilities/iron defenses from Scizor plus the choice band and Charizard is a superpower. It packs 6x damage w/ 3 SD bonuses and the choice band on a normal effective hit. Imagine a super effective blast!

Gengar@lum berry
Docile Nature
EVs: 168 Speed, 174 Attack, 168 Special Attack
~Shadow Ball
~Giga Drain
~Destiny Bond
~Sludge Bomb/HP steel/psychic/???

Gengar is my only wildcard whose moveset is in question and I'd be okay with replacing. Physical attacks can work with BPed attack from Scizor.

I know this isn't perfect so I need help again. I have explanations this time so I hope that helps. Don't be afraid to critizize this team. I want 100% honesty but something constructive. I greatly appreciate the help! Thanks so much!

 

[sims796]

Why does Charizard not have a single Fire move? A special Charizard, or even Bellyzard might work.

Now delete those other post before you get in trouble.

 

[Anti]

How do you delete them? Anyways the reason charizard doesn't have a fire move is because then my nature and EV spread would become a mess. He is supposed to get attack power from scizor. Thanks for the help though. I mean it. THANKS!

EDIT: and I am mega sorry about all the posts. Just typical me being desparate like a little... can't think of a name!

 

[sims796]

To delete a post, press edit. After this post right here, you can ask for more help, and not risk double-posting.

 

[Anti]

Thank you SOOOOOOOOOO much. Now that that's all out of the way, can anyone help this team? Remember, it's 3rd gen, so umbreon can be useful!

 

[MegaDitto]

Triple Post + Unneeded Combo breaker

Umbreon @ Leftovers
EVs: 252 HP, 150 Defense, 108 Special Defense
~Confuse Ray
~Toxic
~Curse
~Baton Pass


I posted this set because Scizor has White Herb attached to it.

Scizor@White Herb
Jolly Nature
EVs: 252 Speed, 252 Special Defense, 6 Attack
~Agility
~Swords Dance
~Baton Pass
~Silver Wind

Kingdra@Chesto Berry
Modest Nature
EVs: 252 HP, 130 Defense, 128 Special Defense
~Toxic/Ice Beam
~Surf
~Sleep Talk
~Rest

Electabuzz@Lum Berry
Modest Nature
EVs: 200 Special Attack, 110 Speed, 200 Attack
~Thunderbolt
~HP Ghost
~Ice Punch
~Fire Punch

 

[Anti]

What about the others? I want this to be out of the ordinary. Is there a set for umbreon that doesn't have baton pass in it? If so I'm hungry for it. HUNGRY!

 

[MegaDitto]

Umbreon @ Leftovers
EVs: 252 HP, 150 Defense, 108 Special Defense
~Confuse Ray
~Toxic
~Mean Look
~Wish

Same set.

Gengar@ Petyta Berry
Modest Nature
EVs: 252 Speed, 252 Special Attack, 6 HP
~Thunderbolt
~Ice Punch
~Fire Punch/Sub
~Psychic

Please delete your posts.

 

[Anti]

'K, I'll take care of that. Also, shouldn't I not have fire and ice punch and thunderbolt on both electabuzz AND Gengar. Wouldn't that be kinda pointless? I'd like to cover as many types as possible if possible (that was a mouthful).

 

[MegaDitto]

'K, I'll take care of that. Also, shouldn't I not have fire and ice punch and thunderbolt on both electabuzz AND Gengar. Wouldn't that be kinda pointless? I'd like to cover as many types as possible if possible (that was a mouthful).

Oh..I'm sorry. T_T

I didn't notice.


Gengar@ Petyta Berry
Modest Nature
EVs: 252 Speed, 252 Special Attack, 6 HP
~Thunderbolt/Shadow Ball
~Ice Punch
~Substitute
~Psychic


Electabuzz@Lum Berry
Modest Nature
EVs: 200 Special Attack, 110 Speed, 200 Attack
~Thunderbolt
~HP Ghost
~Ice Punch
~Thunder Wave

 

[Anti]

They'd both have an ice and a ghost/electric move still. I'd like to keep electabuzz but I'd be more than happy to scrap gengar. A sweeper with no weaknesses someone else on my team already has are my only requirements. Wait, that narrows it down quite a lot...BTW LOVE thunder wave on electabuzz.

 

[Dispiacere]

How do you delete them? Anyways the reason charizard doesn't have a fire move is because then my nature and EV spread would become a mess. He is supposed to get attack power from scizor. Thanks for the help though. I mean it. THANKS!

EDIT: and I am mega sorry about all the posts. Just typical me being desparate like a little... can't think of a name!

If you want to keep Charizards attack EVs, why not teach it Fire Fang(physical attack)?

 

[Anti]

This is 3RD GEN! I am in the minority of people who don't like D/P. Anyways, would overheat work on charizard?

EDIT: Are there any effective annoyer sets for kingdra?

 

[Dark Azelf]

This is 3RD GEN! I am in the minority of people who don't like D/P.

AHAHAHHAAHHA

EDIT: Are there any effective annoyer sets for kingdra?

HAHAHAHAHAHAH

Spoiler:

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merry christmas!

 

[Malicious Metang]

Annoyer sets for Kingdra!

Merry Christmas