my cry(it's nt so bad)

[code zerro the deluge]

Not so Bad
ween my grandma died
i felt down inside
lokking at the gray sky outside
knowing she is in a better place
looking down at my frwoned face
but though i understand
she had to leave it still
herts to me and my family

chorus) we played we like those days
we did every thing
and i am sad but people
say it's not so bad
it's not so bad)

i can see know that my life was bad and that
i did stuff that only a person mad would do
shoot i still now she is happy though
couse i stopped doing the bad thing yo yo
if you understand than knod your heads
couse i knoded for a while
with no answer sept she is
dead now
wow guess this is preety the end and i can't remember when
i have been so sad since the day i wen't in

(chorus)(we played we like those days
we did every thing
and i am sad but people bad people
say it's not so bad
it's not so bad

 

[Lady Akita]

Sometimes life is so bad. We can't do anything about it. Bt hey, being positive is the first step. Great job. ^^One tip is, check over your work for typos before you submit your thread.

 

[Strider]

Sometimes life is so bad. We can't do anything about it. Bt hey, being positive is the first step. Great job. ^^One tip is, check over your work for typos before you submit your thread.

I was under the impression that the typos are intended.