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    Cirnos Servant's Fakemon Thread

    These are my first attempts at making Pokemon, and I would really appreciate some constructive criticism so I can really make some good ones.

    They need to be good because I'm including them in my Hack.

    #1 Baleaf GRASS
    #2 Balloeaf GRASS/FLYING
    #3 Ballonleaf GRASS/FLYING
    #4 Amelf FIRE
    #5 Amefelm FIRE/DARK
    #6 Amefleam FIRE/DARK
    #7 Tado WATER
    #8 Tadopul WATER
    #9 Taderpulch WATER
    #10 Psypod PYSCHIC
    #11 Psychshell PYSCHIC
    #12 Pysleptir PYSCHIC/FLYING
    #13 Turtmoss GRASS/WATER
    #14 Poisbeetle BUG/POISON
    #15 Mofis GROUND
    #16 Mofistle GROUND/FIGHTING
    #17 Cricketel ELECTRIC/BUG
    #18 Icible ICE
    #19 Elecion ELECTRIC/PYSCHIC
    #20 Iophin WATER
    #21 Dragophin WATER/DRAGON
    #22 Trefist GRASS
    #23 Puncoak GRASS/FIGHTING
    #24 Sheetly GHOST
    #25 Ghosheet GHOST
    #26 Unnamed GHOST
    #27 Crocofire FIRE
    #150 Darkreloss DARK

    UPDATE Saturday, December 26
    #28 ??? DARK
    #29 ??? DARK
    #30 ??? DARK
    #31 Grunchlax NORMAL - Evolution of Snorlax
    #32 ??? GROUND
    #33 ??? GROUND/STEEL
    #34 ??? POISON
    #35 ??? POISON
    #36 ??? POISON
    #37 ??? ELECTRIC
    #38 Embikarp FIRE
    #39 Embivod FIRE/WATER
    #40 Tangamoss GRASS - Evolution of Tangela (Night-Time lv up)
    #41 ??? ICE

    I'm letting the public choose some names!

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    hmm, if i were you i'd make them more detailed. ALOT more detailed, give them something that makes them unique.
    look for a weird, obscure animal, and base it on that if you need ideas, like, the ayeaye lemur could be a cool dark-type, for example.
    Spend some time looking at animal physiology too, your fakemon don't look particularly believable right now because the biology is bad.
    its a good start, i hope you continue.
     
    They look good but could be better (i dont know how they just could)
     
    Trent_Jayir said:
    hmm, if i were you i'd make them more detailed. ALOT more detailed, give them something that makes them unique.
    look for a weird, obscure animal, and base it on that if you need ideas, like, the ayeaye lemur could be a cool dark-type, for example.
    Spend some time looking at animal physiology too, your fakemon don't look particularly believable right now because the biology is bad.
    its a good start, i hope you continue.
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    It's not the biology, i'm just not that experienced haha.

    Anyways, adding an update to the first post.
     
    I think your drawing are adorable. They're really cute.

    I have no criticism though, constructive or otherwise, lol.
     
    :p, riiight. experience? okay.
    what i was getting at was that you should probably look at animals anatomy to be able to make your pokemon anatomy look more convincing. it would help you alot, i feel.

    your newest lot are an improvement! I'd be interested to see some dex information/stats maybe if you had them
    I like the Last one, the ice typed bird one. It looks pretty cool.
     
    good!
    They would look awsome in a game sprited.

    EDIT: hundred and third post fTW!
     
    they look quite good :3 and i think it would be better with some more details
     
    I think you should base them more around actual animals, rather than them being completely made up.
    Pokemon are usually based on animals.
     
    Mhh the base is quite good but it's more a base for the final versions :D They are all quite plain and their pose is kinda boring (all have overall the same) and the coloring/shading should be improved. Also you should think over your fire evo line (#004-#006) again.

    Good Luck ;)
     
    No offense whatsoever but, to me they look, well, kinda boring. They are all so simple, (which is somewhat a good thing ), but I'd like too see some more complicated fakemon. But anyways not bad. :)
     
    You some good ideas, but they need a little 'umph'. Maybe some poses and a little more detail to them.
     
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