My Empty World

[phantom_zangetsu]

heres another poem for...uhhh.....her *giggles* shes just sooo beautiful! man!

My Empty World
i think of my world
and i cant see you in it
i try to remember
but i can only see myself alone

i tried to sleep
but cant forget the times
the good times when we were together
but i can only see myself
talking to the trees

why, why cant i remember you
how is it that you have vanished
vanished in thin air?
dissapeared without trace

i miss you now
i want to feel you again
i want to say how much i like you
i dont want you to leave me here

but its too late
your gone now
if only i acted fast
and talked to you before you left

i could at least say "i like you"
and i dont want to see you cry
i wish i could have said that earlier
and not experince this emptyness.......

so now as i stare outside my window,
hoping for an image of you
i try to think of you again
but i only wish
that you are also thinking of me right now.......

so? is that okay?

 

[fallen_angel]

That's so sad.:( It's a good poem though. ^_^

 

[Witch Girl Pilar]

Nice poem... and SAD! Dude, why is that, every time you make a poem, most of them are SAD??? And... I thought you don't LIKE her anymore.... anyways, good poem! ;)

 

[phantom_zangetsu]

i dont witch...but it...my life is kinda empty now...no more to love and all of that....thanks for the critics anyways...