My first 100% custom

Jebus

The Master Splicer
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    I've been trying to get around to this for awhile, I made a nice little evolution of one of my favorites, Castform, haven't thought up a name yet, and I went a little nuts on the shadeing please rate 1-10 thanks for feed back.

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    It's good, but need some touching-up on the outline. I give 7 out of 10. Good Job.
     
    Hm...there's a style of shading I don't see around here too often. It might not be pokemon-style, but it looks well-done.

    The outline looks a bit choppy on the right side and on the top side of the front right "foot" - either substituting the lighter color there for another, darker shade or just using all black in those areas might help it look better.

    Overall, though - it's simple, yet it's still pretty good. It looks cute. ^^
     
    It's shaded nicely,overall I like it. Although it's kinda plain,but it's okay considering it's your first. Nice job! =D
     
    Cowrie said:
    Hm...there's a style of shading I don't see around here too often. It might not be pokemon-style, but it looks well-done.

    The outline looks a bit choppy on the right side and on the top side of the front right "foot" - either substituting the lighter color there for another, darker shade or just using all black in those areas might help it look better.

    Overall, though - it's simple, yet it's still pretty good. It looks cute. ^^

    Amazingingly, I did that shading pixel by pixel in ms paint and I agree with the outlines, there bad
     
    It's like twice the size of castform and has 4 legs instead of 2 with no tail and no mask

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    I like it and all, but the outline needs a little work. 9.5/10
     
    Ultimate Latios said:
    Who Cares About Outline...10/10
    main reason you're still a noviece spriter

    dude, I love gradient shading, makes it look more alive
    I like it to be honest
    outline is choppy but yeah, good none the less
     
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