My first comic.

[Soul Reaper]

This is my first sprite comic, it will soon be a series. (hopefully!) here it is;

 

[latias45]

um.... i do not understand it sorry

 

[Enix-Zae]

Its an intresting consecpt, but it has been poorly developed. The added text is hand written and confusing to read, plus the couple of rs sprites mixed in with the gs. Ill give you a 5 for the concept, 1 for teh final product, and 3 for the story.

3/10 overall, not an average.

 

[Draik]

Not very good...at all
3/10

 

[Poke]

uh no thank you no more please 2/10

 

[Alex_]

No,dont make a series. I didnt even look at it carefully from what I see (default paint colors) it automatically gets a 0.9/10

 

[armadilloHD]

You might think I would own this comic, but I shall not. It made me chuckle, for he did everything you should NOT do in a sprite comic. Look at other sprite comics, see whats expected. Quality wise, it fails -10/10

 

[Alex_]

You might think I would own this comic, but I shall not. It made me chuckle, for he did everything you should NOT do in a sprite comic. Look at other sprite comics, see whats expected. Quality wise, it fails -10/10

I was waiting to see what you'd say XD

 

[Shinin]

Horrible. It gets 0/10, which I will now add to my sig.

 

[Gohan]

It was very confusing.I give it 4/10 and say you should keep going.More with the series.I have a suggestion, use line tools to make clear panels.I couldn't figure out which speech bubble went to which picture.

 

[TheTyphlosionTamer]

It's too confusing I didn't understand it

 

[♥Naomi♥]

um,what everyone else said *lurks off*

 

[Allstories]

"VOMITROCIOUS!"
Yeah, it's pretty poor. The hand-drawn parts look like they were done by a four-year old. Yeesh.

 

[Esupio]

thats actually a sprite comic thats just a medly of stuff

 

[Gohan]

And I say keep going!if the person doesn't practice and have people judge different comics he'll never get better!I'll stay.make some more please!
*Goes to rant at people who have posted in this thread*

 

[Shinin]

"VOMITROCIOUS!"
Yeah, it's pretty poor. The hand-drawn parts look like they were done by a four-year old. Yeesh.

Heh, that brings back memories.

 

[Latias Lover!]

I don't understand... I give it 2/10.

 

[Loco123]

How should I say this,it's t3h Sux0rs Couldn't understand,Graphics=lame
-10/10