This doesn't belong here - it belongs in the main Art Gallery, so I'll just move it along for you ;) Please read the forum descriptions carefully before posting.
Thanks for using my tutorial :) The shading you've done on the head especially is really good and looks very Sugimori-like! As for crit, there's some colouring outside the lines (use the eraser tool to clean this up) And I think the proportions are a bit off - Pokémon often have unusually-sized heads in relation to their body, especially first-stage Pokémon.
Keep it up though!
*moves*
--FG