My first Fan Fic.....Please read! ^^

pokejungle

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    I have nothing better to do, so I am going to write a little chapter of my fan fic. Plz bear with me, this is my first time writing one.....




    The thunder crashed, letting loose a torent of rain. The sky had darkened instantly when the thunderstorm had started. It was around 6 PM, but looked about 9. Lissa walked down the sidewalk with a wormple riding on her shoulder. She was tall thin and had long golden hair. She wore a pinkshirt with a pokeball logo in the middle. Her pants were tan shorts. She had no umbrella, so she was being thorouly soaked. The rain seemed not to daunt her, for she for a grin that could not be extinguised easily. She asng softly to herself as she walked. Lissa stopped abruptly when she heard soft crying coming from in front of a tree. She went over to investigate. A small boy was there. he appeared to be 9 or 10. He wore a black shirt with a pale yellow crescent moon on it. His green shorts were now a shade darker from the rain.

    Please tell me if its worth continuing...
     
    i like the beginning so far
    please continue it!
     
    thanks........

    blood covered his face from a deep cut in his forehead. Lissa gasped. The boy lost conscouisness and slumped to the ground. Lissa grabbed the boy and ran. He was very thin and didn't weigh much. His frail body was raspily breathing. Luckily she was near the hospital, whcih had probably been he boy's destination.

    EDIT: Added this:

    *at hospital*

    Lissa walked into the dreary hospital room. the walls were brown tiles and smelled of cleaning products. She wondered how many had died in this room. She was glad the boy hadn't been one of them.
    It had been a week since the boy's dramatic trip to the hospital. he had lost a substanial amount of blood, but, with rest, had recovered quickly. Lissa had been in everyday to see him. All he remembered was his name. Laupe. (pronounced Loop) He didn't know where his parents might be or how he had gotten hurt. He had nothing on him except his clothes and a pokeball. The pokeball had a sneasel in it. he remembered catching it years back. The hospital was working to find his parents, otherwise he'd have to go into foster care until they were found, if they were found. Lissa cared deeply for the boy now. She felt as if she had a responsibility.
    "How are you doing," asked Lissa.
    " Fine, the doctors say they have set up a foster family for me, so I'm going home tomorrow."
    The boy didn't seem to be bothered that his parents hadn't been found.
     
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    I'm enjoying this fic also! Keep up the good work!
     
    Thanks......

    The foster parents turned out to be Lissa's neighbors. She helped him move in and adjust to life here. He must have been from out of region, for no records of him were to be found any records on him. Together Lissa and Laupe trained their pokemon. The wurmple had grown into a tough beautifly.

    One summer afternoon, Lissa and Lauper were playing tag. Laupe tripped, and Lissa immedialty ran over to help. He was getting up when Lissa saw the huge bruise marks on his back.

    "What happened?" Lissa asked, shocked.

    "I..umm...ran into a wall...." answered Laupe, obviously uncomfortable.
     
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