My first sprite comic!

NiNGi's Worst Nightmare

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    Last night, while I was half awake and sipping coffee, I got bored and decided to make a Mega Man-based sprite comic. The first one is an introduction, and it's not meant to be funny. Before I put my second one out, I want to see if there are changes I could make. I will try my best to improve it!

    Without further delay, please sit back, grab a soda, and read the incredibly short comic that I was too lazy to name!

    [PokeCommunity.com] My first sprite comic!
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    The background is boring,the comic is boring,its too short,and there;s no humor in it.You've failed to make a decent comic 0/10
     
    Thats no exscuse and hes wanting advice,theres not even enough of a comic to give advice.
     
    I'll work on a better background, and I'm gonna add length/humor/more characters/a title (maybe)/an evil villian of some sort in the next one. I have plenty of free time tonight, and I'm not very tired, either!
     
    This is gonna be like all the other Megaman Recolor comics. CRAP
    or you make it goodly awsomeness. Right now it has all comic clisheas, like "The Author" and the megaman Recolors. Kinda like Bob and George. You might not know this but these are very common on the Internet. Anyways lets hope this is good.......
     
    Well, there is only one thing to do: NUKE THIS P.O.S! *runs off to find a bomb sprite*
     
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