My First Sprites

Dannwe123

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    These are my first decent sprites.
    Make sure to leave some feedback!!



    Scratch sprites:
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    Fusions:
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    I'll probably add more later
     
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    Your scratches aren;t bad at all, they just contain too much dithering, try using more smoother shading. Keep it up.
     
    Your Giratina/Blastiose's horn doesn't really fit on its head. Your scratches have crappy shading, especially the one with the flames. It seems like the flames don't light up the bottom of the sprite, even though they should. Also, both scratch sprites have a pretty bad outline. They're not straight or curved where they need to be and they're too dark.

    Also, the flames on that one scratch seem. . Bad. It's hard to explain, but it just doesn't seem like flames.

    However, your Rhydon/Dusknoir is excellently done.​
     
    ^Some of what she said.=p

    But yes, the horn is placed wrong and the outline is bad, but I actually like all of those.=p
    And you saved in .png! Unlike me and my first post.=p

    Although To me, the giratina wings just kinda spoiled it.=p And the 2nd scratch...I just don't like it.=p

    But overall they're good, and your scratches are better than anything I've scratched.=p
     
    I like your scratches, although if they're supposed to be actual sprites, they'd need to be downsized to 80x80.
     
    Oh, they look a lot bigger than they actually are. :)
    Well it'd be interesting to see them smaller, though. That is, if you want to do that.
     
    Most of the fusions are quite acceptable, except for...
    [PokeCommunity.com] My First Sprites

    You do realise that thing looks crazy, right?
     
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