my fist ever sonic battle styled sprite

[Fox♠]

it's charmy the bee

c + c

credit to digi ex for the tails base I used

 

[Esupio]

may I ask how is that sonic battle style 0.o

 

[Fox♠]

https://sprites.fireball20xl.com/SSA/Sheets/tailsbattle2.png
look @ tails first pose..that's what I used as the base..and iot isn't gonna be perfect the first time round is it?

 

[Esupio]

oh right I see now its good for a first try erm 6/10 its needs a bit of improving

 

[Fox♠]

yea I thought I got something wrong,...jut not sure what..you don't mind pointing out sum bad things do you?

 

[Esupio]

he has no facial expression really

 

[armadilloHD]

NONE of the sonic battle sprites have facial exspressions

Edit:Whoops yes they do

 

[Fox♠]

ok so add a lil expression

 

[Raizor Blaid]

yes, the facial expressions will help and using charmies shoes instead of tails' would help too

 

[stunt296]

Try and make his hand like a fist sort of,because why is he pointing at the ground,you know what I mean???

 

[Raizor Blaid]

well if you looked at the sheet vaati just showed it was tails bringing out his cannon, and... well I don't know why his hand is out like that but it was on the original sprite too.... anyways yeah