My Lost Soul and Without You

[phantom_zangetsu]

okay as i promised, that when i come back...well ive been only been gone for a day but what the heck here it is 2 poems in 2 days, i think...

My Lost Soul
Im walking on the earth
trying to find my soul
the answers that i seek
are hidden in my soul

my forgotten memories of the past
escaped my mind
i cant remember anyone
but you

you blinded me with your so called "care"
and you tried to grasp my life
you said you liked me
but it was just a lie

untill i find my soul
my image wil forever watch you
haunt you through day and night
and my image wil not leave untill you say sorry

this sadness is never ending
trying to control my mind
i cannot bear to see you suffer infront of me
but somehow i want you gone.

and heres the other one:

Without Youyou...
keeping all our memories
trying not to show it to me
is just so unfair

why does it feel so bad?
when you consider me as a stranger in the mist
its troubling my mind
and how i feel

eventhough your so close
you feel so distant
but i cant bring you back
but its true, the way i feel

its all showing infront of you
but you cant see
the sound of your voice
makes me feel sad

bacause i know that your gone
even if i see you
no matter how long i wait
i cant wait to see tomorrow
without you...
im still up to new poems soon as soon as i master that chemical eqations my teacher is giving me. *groan* well comments...now!

 

[Witch Girl Pilar]

Hey, nice one! You changed the font and the color. Cool. Anyways, I think the 1st one is better. Really suits ya mood, dude. Hehehehe...

 

[Enjoy_and_love_life]

nice storys dude they were cool.

 

[Envy]

There both really great! If I was to rate it,I would give it a 100/100!!^^

 

[phantom_zangetsu]

thanks guys. my world of poetry revolves around you, critics lol. expect for more guys!!!