My Messed up Sprite Comic O_o

[battlemaster]

Intro:
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Chapter 1:
Part 1 (remember to Zoom in)
what do u guys think?

 

[Sheepnut]

Your right it is messed up..
Im having trouble knowing whats happening. Why is mario continuously hit with a hammer?

 

[Enix-Zae]

because he keeps being annoying and stuff. And he talked during the movie . I get it. Im cool >_> <_< >_>

anyway. Its an ok comic, although chapter 1 part 1 was a bit cliche when it comes to that sorta thing. Anyway. Back to what i was doing....

 

[Karasuma]

The palletes are okay and the plot is cliched as you mentioned it. The only disadvantage I see is the use of Speech bubbles. You need to use speech bubble sprites to make your comic more effective and enjoyable. Other than that is okay in the use of the sprites. Chapter one: Part one was a little funny. I recommend you to keep on going, you'll get better at it, I'm sure you will

 

[battlemaster]

i am a n00b and i do plan on continuing and hopfully get better :)
and yes Enix-Zae, ur cool ;)

 

[Enix-Zae]

what? someone agree's with me? could it be? has the world finally imploded?

anyway. Good luck with your comic, and as rock lee said, after experience you will get better. You should see the sprite comics I made 4 years ago >_>

 

[Tbone2356]

Its An Ok Comic,
Was kind of funny :classic: