My Microsoft Paint; Fade FPS pics!

[Fallen Angel_Messiah Of Black Roses]

My first one is from my Game; Dark Caliber: Investigation

If you can't tell, that red cursor thing is the aimer, please review.

 

[Loki]

Mmmmmmm.... It looks very Paint-ish. < <

I think you would do well by er, using the curved line tool, rather then the freehand tool, it makes the whole picture a lot smoother and it's a lot easier to figure out whats... going on...

The fourth window from the upper left hand corner over to the right is really good though. The crack in it? That's really good. :3

Shading? That's always good too. I like how you used lines with different thickness though~

 

[Fallen Angel_Messiah Of Black Roses]

In case it's hard to tell, he has a squid head.

Mizuki:

thanks for the advice