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brandonspikes

The Deathbringer
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    • Seen Dec 12, 2006
    hey im new to mixes so i just want to know if im good for a beginner

    *image removed* --jimewbi
    *image removed* --draphlosion
    *image removed* -megaliphlosion
    *image removed* --dragoncham
    *image removed* --mewtres
    *image removed* --mewdos
    *image removed*-- mewticuno
    *image removed* --scizard
    *image removed* --pikamander
    *image removed* --raizard
    *image removed* --raymew-oh

    plz rate :cheeky:
     
    great 100/100 i like em all
     
    so does that mean i'm ok?
     
    Oi, I hope you don't hate me for constructive critisim, (<.< My spelling again) but here it goes:

    Jimewbi:The shading could use some work, like maybe the darker green should be near the bottom of his helmet...and you must recolor the outline. Overall: 4/10

    Draphlosion: Pretty good splicing, you could have recolored the tail a whole lot better, adn again with the outline of your recolored parts! You must recolor the outline! Overall: 6/10

    Megaliphlosion: Oi, oi, oi, oi...this is by far one of the weirdest splices I have ever seen. Again, your shading is completely off, and your outlines need some work! Overall: 4/10

    Dragoncham: This is the best one you have posted, but the green outline that should be around the 'pants' Overall: 7/10

    Mewtres: Creepy...Recolor the outline! The left wing is cut off...nice head though. ^_^; 5/10

    Mewdos:Really bad...but I like the outline! 4/10

    Mewticuno    :Recolor Mew's Outline...5/10

    Scizard: If only it wasn't cut off at the right...7/10

    Pikamander: Not bad, not bad at all...7/10

    Raizard:I'm not going to say anything....4/10

    Raymew-oh: Fix the left wing...work with some of the shading. ^_^; 6/10


    Sorry....^_^;
     
    is this good *image removed* --flymence ??
     
    yep that does mean ur good an that gets 10/10
     
    As for actal splicing, they're pretty decent. ^^ I guess it's okay for a beginner. I like the dragonchan the best. :P

    Many of your sprites's colors are weird. It needs actual shading, not other colors in place of it. :/ And on the first one, the darker color should be a tad lighter. It doens't look that good that way.
    When you do that they'll look much better. And do remember the outlining, esp. the Mew. That's the one that bothers me the most. ^^;;

    Keep practicing and I bet you'll be really good. ^^
    ~ nayana_1120 (@_@)
     
    {bulbasaur& pikachu line}
    *image removed* -bulbachu
    *image removed*- Pivysaur
    *image removed* -raisaur

    {shiny rayquazard}

    *image removed*
    Rate plz :D
     
    opps my bad the middle one is pivysaur
     
    Hahaha.... all of your sprites are really good and funny! Kewl...... :confused: Hey.. if you have time, can you post some too in Rave's Sprite Gallery in Sprite section?

    Rave :disappoin
     
    2 more
    *image removed* -Castmecho
    *image removed*-vultales
     
    Your spriets are good.
    Only thing I see is outlining. You need to make it look uniform, otherwise it looks a tad bit odd. bulbachu and Castmecho (the pink part on it anyway) are the worst.
    Poor vultails; it was the attack of the gif. ;-;

    Everything else is good. You're getting better. ^^

    oO;; how long have I been trying to type this review? XD
     
    Overral 7.5/10

    Not perfect, you need better recoloring, itll look better
     
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