My poke Haiku with 17 syllables

Not bad for your first. But you need to fix a couple grammar errors.
You need to put a space between the comma and majesticaly. The word Sleeps needs to be capitalized. And end the poem with a period.
But it's your first. Keep trying, and you will succeed.
 
Do you know that Haikus are either 3 syllables-5 syllables-3 syllables or 5-7-5 syllables?
 
zommy08 said:
Do you know that Haikus are either 3 syllables-5 syllables-3 syllables or 5-7-5 syllables?
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This is a Pokemon Haiku, also known as a Poke-ku, not a traditional Haiku.

The first line is the name of a pokemon while the second and third line fill out the rest of the seventeen syllable count, and containing a kigo.

I may have made that up on the spot, but it honestly sounds so good I want to start encouraging people to write Poke-ku's with those rules.

As for your Poke-ku Pikabowser123, I like your use of soft cloud as your kigo, despite the fact I imagine you were slightly oblivious to the fact that a kigo was required.
 
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