My Random Manga D:

[☆Patched☆]

I'm pretty sure I can post it. :)

Anyways, these are kind of big files, and I don't want to take up too much space, so I'll just post links, if that's okay. ^^;

Hopefully, I'll be able to update this list as I go.
C+C (of course there isn't much to critisize right now ;) )

Cover: https://eternalwar.deviantart.com/art/Patched-Cover-114770746
Chaper 1: https://eternalwar.deviantart.com/art/Patched-Chapter-1-114636617

 

[Poke_a_Dialga!]

I think (i think) the eyes needs some improvements...
Well, it is great as i know it is hard on computers...

 

[☆Patched☆]

I think (i think) the eyes needs some improvements...
Well, it is great as i know it is hard on computers...

I'm not sure what you mean (you really didn't explain much). ^^; Hehe, well, I drew it on paper, scanned, and colored in Photohop Elements.

Anyways, I'm redoing it all, I've improved a lot already.

 

[Poke_a_Dialga!]

Oh, i thought you drew it on computer :P
But if you drew it on paper, it should have look better...
Well, i think just the eyes needs improvements...

 

[☆Patched☆]

Oh, i thought you drew it on computer :P
But if you drew it on paper, it should have look better...
Well, i think just the eyes needs improvements...

Example plz? :P I still don't understand what you mean. I mean, I don't like copying somebody else's style.

 

[Cacttus]

Why is it see through like that ?

 

[☆Patched☆]

Why is it see through like that ?

See through? Are you talking about the cover with all the huge white space??? (nothing is transparent) :)
(you're goning to have to full fiew for better quality though)

 

[Poke_a_Dialga!]

I think (thinks) the eyes needs more light source...

 

[☆Patched☆]

I think (thinks) the eyes needs more light source...

^^ Now I know what you mean. When I drew it, the pupils in the eyes were just too tiny to put any detail into them.