My stuff

[lalo0101]

First off i need Please give me Constructive Criticism Thats all i ask for and credits

Tiles

Hg Ss Mountains
One Random House and can you tell me what pal is better?

all tiles that are posted here are public as long as you give me credits.

If there not public they will be jpeg

 

[pokefuser]

cool work there! :D
how long have you been scratching??

 

[lalo0101]

cool work there! :D
how long have you been scratching??

well its been a while but its about 1-3 months

 

[Uecil]

wow, some nice work.
your pretty good ^^

 

[hackerofdarkness]

Nice tiles lalo0101 even the house and trees just beutiful and amazing

 

[Darkerm]

My newst tile witch looks really weired to me. Any tips?

In attacment

Nice tree but too dark color. The shadow is too dark around the roots. Good luck, waiting for more.

 

[Alignment]

My newst tile witch looks really weired to me. Any tips?

In attacment

Umm, i think its too pointy, and the bottom is too rounded. If you are going to round the bottom like that, then you must also make the transition rounder, by that I mean make it not just cave in and go up sharply. Nothing wrong with the shadows, the colors look good except for the fact that the top of the tree is too bright with is completely nothing like the bottom, making it look weirder than it is. Good job though :)


EDIT: I toned down some of the colors, but what you should look at is the transition, I tried to keep that Christmas tree concept as well.

Left is yours mine is right...

 

[Darkerm]

Umm, i think its too pointy, and the bottom is too rounded. If you are going to round the bottom like that, then you must also make the transition rounder, by that I mean make it not just cave in and go up sharply. Nothing wrong with the shadows, the colors look good except for the fact that the top of the tree is too bright with is completely nothing like the bottom, making it look weirder than it is. Good job though :)


EDIT: I toned down some of the colors, but what you should look at is the transition, I tried to keep that Christmas tree concept as well.

Left is yours mine is right...

Lalo0101's tree is very good. But your tree is better.

 

[tomthepom]

the windows are kinda eye burning (sorry can't think of another word).
i like your tiles, they are very good, the building are still good but they need to be a bit more curvy, official pokemon tiles work on curves so it would be nice to see some more.

 

[.Tactic.]

well thank you


right now im making tiles for Bolen's hack

and heres what i have done so far (yes house i know the house is bad its my first one)


use them if you want

The bottom of the tree, smexy, top, not smexy :S
Anyway, the house is too small and you need it much bigger.

 

[lalo0101]

The bottom of the tree, smexy, top, not smexy :S
Anyway, the house is too small and you need it much bigger.

yeah thats was the first building tile i made

 

[.Tactic.]

Well, Your latest house is definetely improved, keep on tiling like that and you will reach the level of my olf tile project partner. but try and include more curves, at the moment i am not getting the correct Pokemon feel from it, otherwise, good work, i hope to see more.

 

[lalo0101]

well what do you think of my newest tile

and yeah pals aren't very good

 

[Darkerm]

The lab tile is very good. Keep up the good work.

 

[imapirate]

That's actually pretty darn good! You should edit your first post to change your tiles for the edited ones, just an advice =).

 

[Astrotastic:D]

the first tree looks too pillow shaded for my own liking...:o...but its still pretty good :D

 

[lalo0101]

The lab tile is very good. Keep up the good work.

Thanks

That's actually pretty darn good! You should edit your first post to change your tiles for the edited ones, just an advice =).

I really dont know what your mean but they are not edits

the first tree looks too pillow shaded for my own liking...:o...but its still pretty good :D

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Anyways can someone please give me Constructive Criticism theres only about 2 post that have that so please post more

Anyways update

Which pals are better?

you can only use my tiles if you give me credits

 

[874521]

Thanks

I really dont know what your mean but they are not edits


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Anyways can someone please give me Constructive Criticism theres only about 2 post that have that so please post more

Anyways update

Which pals are better?

New rule you can only use my tiles if you give me Constructive Criticism and you must still give credits k

They're both good but I prefer the 1st set because it looks nicer.

 

[lalo0101]

They're both good but I prefer the 1st set because it looks nicer.

ok thanks for commenting any comment on mountains?