My Team [Rate/Critisize (helpfully)]

[Johny_Hungry]

Alright, so as it is now... this is my team. A few slots are missing and i would love suggestions. I want a baton passer, without using an Eevee form, cause i wanna use vaporeon. So yeah... HELP

Marowak@Thick Club
EVS: 252-Attk 252-Spd 6-Hp
Nature: Jolly [+Spd -Sp. attk]
Ability: Stone Head [prevent recoil]
Attacks
Stone Edge
Earthquake
Double Edge
Fire Punch

Crobat@Choice Band/Black Sludge
Nature: Jolly [+Spd -Sp. Attk]
EVs: 253-Attk 253-Spd 4 Hp
Ability:
Attacks
Brave Bird
Cross Poision
U-Turn
Hypnosis/Pursuit

Ninetails@Left Overs/Focus Sash/Wide Lens
Nature: Timid
EVs: 252-Spd 252-Sp. attk 6-Hp
Ability: Flash Fire
Attacks
Hypnosis
WoW/Nastyplot
Flamethrower/Fire Blast
HP Electric/Energy Ball

Electivire@Left Overs
Nature: Adamant [+Attk -Sp. Attk]
EVs: 252-Spd 252-attk 6-Sp. Attk
Ability: Motor Drive
Attacks
Cross Chop
Thunder Bolt
Ice Punch
EQ

Vaporeon@Leftovers
Nature: Bold
EV's: 252 HP / 252 Def / 6 SpAtt
Ability: Water Absorb
Attacks
Surf
Ice Beam
Hidden Power Electric
Wish

These Last three I wanna choose one between [I guess I'm gonna follow everyones golden rule: "Without a wall your team will fail"]

Blissey@Leftovers
Nature: Impish
EV's: 252-Hp 129-Def 129-Sp.Def
Ability:Natural cure
Attacks
Counter
Seismic Toss
Softboiled/Substitue
Aromatherapy/Focuspunch

Skarmory
Nature: Impish
EV's: 252-Def 252-Spd. 6-Attk
Ability:Keen Eye
Attacks
Bravebird/Night Slash
Whirlwind/Night Slash
Stealth Rock
Spikes

Ninjask
Nature: Jolly
EV's: 252-Spd. 252-Attk. 6-Hp
Ability: Speed Boost
Attacks
Baton Pass
X-Scissor/Night Slash
Sword Dance
Protect

 

[Arsibiyez]

On Crobat: Don't use 2 attacks of the same type on the same Pokemon. Crobat doesn't need Brave Bird and Aerial Ace. You can replace that with something more useful, like Cross Poison or Poison Jab (whichever it is that he can learn. I'm too lazy to look at his movepool right now... If he can learn both, use Cross Poison).

Also, be sure not to use Choice Band and Hypnosis at the same time.


On Ninetails: Wide Lens and Fire Blast. You don't need HP [Electric] since Energy Ball covers all your weaknesses. You can put Nasty Plot instead of WoW, unless you really want double status.


On Electivire: Ice Punch, please. I don't know what the last move should be, though.