I take Mullet's advice as much as I can as possible to put myself on a higher league.
Being there from the start doesnt usually indicate their duelling experience, though most of the time it would.
I've been playing under a league around a year or 2 ago, aiside from that, all i've been doing was play for fun and recreation.
I stopped YGO in about May, then started again in June. I'am not all that good because I also spend time playing other TCGs which interfere and conflict with one another.
About your deck..
Some cards are unnecessary, thus need to be replaced or removed as required..
Cybex Mewtwo said:
Darkness Revival total - 50 cards
Monsters
1-4 stars
White Magician Pikeru (Spellcaster)
Kiseitai (Feind)
Zombie Tiger (Zombie)
Sangan (fiend)
Spirit Reaper (zombie)
Pyrimad Turtle (zombie)
Pyrimad Turtle (zombie)
Shadow Slayer (Fiend)
Decayed Commander (zombie)
Wall of Illusion (Fiend)
Master Kyonshee (zombie)
Royal Keeper (Zombie)
Castle of Dark Illusions (Fiend)
Protector of Sanctuary (Fiend)
Wandering Mummy (zombie)
5-6 stars
Marie The Fallen One (Fiend)
Lesser Fiend (fiend)
Vampire Lord (zombie)
Vampire Lord (zombie)
Dark Dust Spirit (zombie)
Ryo Kokki (zombie)
Dark Ruler Ha Des (Fiend)
7-12 stars
Despair from the Dark (zombie)
Special Summoning
Vampire Genesis (8 stars) (Remove Vampire Lord from Field to out of play) (zombie)
Dark Necrofear (8 stars) (3 fiends from graveyard to out of play) (fiend)
Magic
Heavy Storm
Restructer Revolution
Scapegoat
Soul Exchange
MST (Mystical Space Typhoon)
Premature Burial
Snatch Steal
Tribute to the Doomed
Mage Power
Card Destruction
Book of Life
Book of Life
Call of the Mummy
Call of the Mummy
Trap
The Spell Absorbing Life
Call of the Haunted
Michizure
Torrential Tribute
Grave Lure
Magic Drain
Altar for Tribute
Compulsory Evacuation Device
Tutan Mask
Fiend Comedian
Deck Devistation Virus
Here are some things to do.
- Altar for Tribute
+ Mystik Wok
Mystik Wok is more effective, and its a quick-play, as for AoT, its a trap but not a counter.
- Marie The Fallen One
- Lesser Fiend
- Vampire Lord
+ ??? (Something useful)
Vampire Genesis isnt all that good, after all that tributing, you just come up with an average 8er that has not an all good effect. + It cant be Special Summoned, and Dark Necrofear, its going to rendered useless in most duels ever since the new cards came out, it has no real effect. (if you know what i mean).
- Fiend Comedian
+ ???
Fiend Comedian is a joke, it has no benefits at all, other from 50% survival?
- Master Kyonshee
+ ???
Master Kyonshee is not effective at all. It has minimal stats for comparing to cards at this day and age.
- Book of Life
+ Monster Reincarnation
Even though it has discarding benefits, you could do this since it doesnt have to be a Zombie-type monster.