Nameles comic

[Smarties-chan]

This is my first attempt at a sprite comic please tell me what you think and what I should improve... and please do remember that I suck at coming up with jokes.
~Part one~
~Part two~
~Part three~
~Part four~
~Part five~

*NOTE* the comics are only three screens big because otherwise they exceed the limit imageshack allows.

 

[Crystal Walrus]

not bad but your pics are to big try and make a smaller pic of where he is and add in speach bubbles

 

[Smarties-chan]

Thanks for the comment but, my speech bubbles are horrible so I'll just use ''the color tells wich person is speaking'' system.

 

[Crystal Walrus]

seems ok if you put it that way whell its still better than what i did last time i made a comic

hey smarty do you have trainer sprites of yourself like the ones in games?

 

[Fox♠]

it's not terrible, I really ahve nothing against it, i just don't find it that ammusing, you made 1 typo, which is in the slide where he knocks the old man iover, the Y looks like a V

 

[Signomi]

Well, you just started the comic so I'm not really going to rate it just yet ^_^ Though, Part 1 confused me a bit..shouldn't the first panel be on the right? o_O Well, keep at it smarty_arty! =D

 

[Smarties-chan]

No it shouldn't. The first panel shows what happened after he got out of the lab the lab part was a flashback.

 

[Signomi]

Oh..well I see ^_^ Well as I said, keep at it =D

 

[Smarties-chan]

I will but, not before tomorrow I'm feeling really lazy today ^__^

 

[Smarties-chan]

Okay since no one has replied in a long time and I'm done with the two next parts I'm going to make my first double post. The parts 4 and 5 are now up.

 

[Karasuma]

Hey, they're not bad. The first ones remind me of how I started, but don't worry, I can see you doing better in the future. If you want some trainer sprites just tell me, OKAY?^.^

 

[Smarties-chan]

Well I can make my own trainer sprites, but thanks for the offer.