[Other] Need Critique+ Help for my RomHack, a RomHack that has never been done before!

Warden123 · Oct 14, 2014

HELLO POKE COMMUNITY

My name is Warden123, but you can call me Warden. I am new to Pokecommunity, and an aspiring romhacker.

and..... I need help with that

Here is my intro hopefully you are interested

The Continent of Auth has been war stricken for many Generations. Conflict over conflict rolled on, with deaths reaching into millions. Human fought alongside Pokémon, against other Humans with Pokémon. Eventually Three nations rose out of the ashes: The Emirate of Sahra'a, a land of Billowing, Crimson Sands, ruled over with an Iron fist by the Emir Thid, The Oligarchate of Ais, a land covered much in Ice, but with Volcanoes of Hot fire, and finally the Republic of Hutain, a land governed entirely by forest. These three nations have remained at war ever since, vying for control and manoeuvring politically. Will you bring peace to these nations? Or Will you lead your Nation to conquer all of Auth, becoming the Hero of your people? Can you and your Pokémon fight in conjunction for conquest? Or will you struggle for Liberty? The choice is yours, in Pokémon: WAR.

FEUTURES

Spoiler:

three different countries, the Oligarchate of Ais, the Republic of Hutain, and the Emirate of Sahra'a. Each has it's own people, culture, geography, map, and storyline. All are at war.

here is a country profile for each:

Spoiler:

Emirate of Sahra'a
This land is Full of Sand, which billows Crimson over the landscape. Oases dot the landscape, and at each there is a town or village. They have little water, but that which they have, is in the purest form, almost mystical in nature. As such, their warriors fight alongside Water-type Pokémon. Though smaller in size, population, wealth ,and strength then the other two lands in Auth, they have always survived invasion, due to the Heat and lack of water around, the wall like mountains that protect them. Their warriors are few, but tough, hardened for conquest in other lands. Will you sate the people hunger for plunder and conquest? Or will you establish peace, and become the hero of the lower-class?

The Republic of Hutain
Forest covers this land. Tree stands over tree in these green, fertile, highlands. Unlike the other two nations, Hutain is a Republic. It's people are great propagators of the arts, and their literature is the wonder of the world. Their forest warriors are masters of stealth and the bow, striking quickly then moving into the Shadow of the Trees. Their Pokémon are similar, being a mixture of Grass and dark Pokémon. The fertile lands of Hutain have caused their people to grow quickly. They stand a target for attack. Will you strike now, before you are attacked? Will you bolster your defences and foster the arts while building an army? Will you lead your nation to greatness, or bring it to its doom?

The Oligarchate of Ais
Ais is a forbidding land, covered with Ice, snow, and tundra. It's people are in equal measure good seafarers, wise merchants, and burly warriors. Their Long ships have sailed to many lands, both for trade and for war. Their land has numerous volcanoes, hot and fiery. A thousand thousand times have their Fire-mountains covered the earth with soot and fire. Yet all this strife has hardened the Ais People. their Pokémon come from both their volcanoes and the icy landscape around. Their treasuries lay full, their weapons above their hearths. Will you lead them to pick up their axes, spears and swords, and expand their lands? Or will you make a rich people richer, funding everything from universities to larger militaries, becoming a city on the hill for all nations to admire?

There will be multiple backgrounds for each. I will edit my post when I finish on them, but they will eventually all merge into one at some point in the story line.

What I need help with:
Scripting

mapping

Spirting

story branching

making choosable character sprites

adding moves

people to critique what I have/what is developed

probably a lot more that i haven't thought of.

well what do all of you guys think? I'll try and post a general map soon.