Need some help with one of my drawings...

[Yameneko549]

https://img.photobucket.com/albums/v616/Yameneko549/gottadance.png

Got a new one, my first attempt at a chibi-ish look, though it's not quite finished yet. I'm looking for one thing: The words for the chorus to "Polka o Dolka", which is one of the Japaneese Pokemon Anime ending themes. I beleive it's one of the Advance Gen ones.

Oh, and, if your wondering, this WILL be redrawn after being finished.

From left to right:
Left Upper Stage: Absol, Snorlax, Bulbasaur, Charmander

Right Upper Stage: Squirtle, Sandshrew, Jigglypuff, Oddish

Center Stage: Togepi, Meowth, Skiploom

Planned:
Banner Upper part: Absol, Sandshrew, Meowth, Bulbasaur

Banner Lower part: Snorlax, Skiploom

Edit: I've decided on something special for the banner at the bottom. You'll hopefully like it. It was suggested by a friend in a chatroom.

Edit: Fully updated.

 

[Cybex Mewtwo]

I was never good with chibi drawing either...but there are a few guidelines when it comes to them. They must or generally have large heads to small bodies and rather large eyes. Thier limbs are short and sometimes stubby, and the most detail is put to the head. Unless you want them to look like their actual counterpart, then simply reanimate the character smaller with larger eyes. Simple, unless I missed a key point siomewhere (and knoqing me...there is...)

 

[Yameneko549]

Yeah, I kinda figured that. BTW, what do you think of what I've got so far?

Edit: I'm open to comments at any time for any of my drawings.

 

[Cybex Mewtwo]

Well, I'm not one to be nit-picky and tell you every detail of what you need to improve (because no one ever did it for me, so I had to fix my own mistakes). But what I can say is that you do well. You have a nack for drawing and I am a fan of yours. I will always have your back and and I can say for sure that you are a great person. By the way, in one of your other posts, I mentioned that I was bad at drawing when I first started out. Well, I found an old drawing still saved in my photobucket account. Here it is for you to see. This is...kinda average compared to my more recent exploits.

 

[Yameneko549]

Heh, the only real thing I see wrong with that one is the non-mecanical eye seems a bit off.

Thanks for the encouraging words. I really should get to work on some more drawings.

*note: Excuse my spelling. Just woke up. Stupid DS alarm didn't wake me up earlier. XD

 

[Cybex Mewtwo]

Have no fear. I have no alarm clock to begin with! HAHAHA!

 

[Yameneko549]

Sadly, I have four. My NDS, my laptop, the clock above my desktop, and my surround sound system.

I hate it when my parents decide to use my sound system to wake me up. Let's just say I'm surprised that the sheet rock wall behind my bed hasn't given in yet.

Hmm... that gives me an idea....

 

[Cybex Mewtwo]

Bwahahahaha! That's funny! And hopefully the little idea churning in your...absol morphed mind...yeah...that's right... comes to life 'cause it sounds like a gut buster! Can't wait

 

[Yameneko549]

Yeah, I am a twisted Absol, aren't I? XD

Maybe I'll make more comics. This is pretty much the way Amber Panyko started her comic: Dan and Mab's Furry Adventures. Look at the early archives if you don't beleive me.