ChrisTom
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This Fictional Story is rated PG-13 due to strong language.
Ello' everybody! ChrisTom here! So one day I was playing my second favorite game (first being Pokemon of course) which is called "Nevermore". Nevermore is a series of games made by Adam Westerman, a 20 year old artist who seems to be much like Lewis Carrol. The games themselves take place in a wondrous land called Nevermore, which is on the brink of reality and dreams. It follows the protagonist Olek who is on a search for treasure to help fund his very poor town. I was playing the game for the 67th time when I thought to myself "I bet I could make a small novelization of this brilliant game." I asked Mr. Westerman himself who said that he would love me to write the story of Nevermore. So here I am about to post this story on Pokecommunity, DeviantART, and possibly when it is finished MorningSkyrail.com
This is my first chaptered Fiction, so please post all comments concerns and corrections. As I am typing this I am midway Chapter 6. As of right now though, I am only going to post the Prologue and Chapter 1. I am heavily basing this off of the Nevermore games, but I will be adding some parts not seen in the games. Thank you all for taking the time to read this. Enough of my blabbing, here it is, Nevermore:
There are tales of a land faraway. A land where the Sun and the Moon are friends, where the seasons melt into one. A land where the forests are chaotically thick, and the night sky is the darkest blue. A land where monsters coexist with one another. Where beautiful lush landscapes and massive mountains are the norm. This world is singular but coexistent.
For you see, this is a land of dreams. A land where perception is reality. A place where dreams are the same as the waking world.
And in the night when the women and men and children of the world go to rest, something incredible happens. At that moment, right when their eyes start to shut and enter another realm, they see it. For only a split second their wondrous world becomes that land. Their world can see Nevermore.
Chapter 1: The Vanishing
"GOD DAMN IT! IT'S GOING DOWN!!" The captain screamed.
The saltwater ran into his sore throat. His senses were becoming so intense. The only things in his world were the roaring of the waves and the feeling of the cold water smacking his body. The night was filled with the clouds and the waves. A whooshing wave sprayed gallons of angry saltwater onto the splintering deck. He was barely able to climb back into the water filled room.
"Are you sending the god damn help?!" He yelled into the transmitter.
"...A#%N....R...B&B...."
Nothing came back but a few garbled words and static. He knew he was going to die. He loved this ship more than life itself, but it handled horribly in storms. NOAA promised him a new one but they rarely kept to their promises. The lack of funding made his project go down the drain. Why was it so hard to find out where a single sound was coming from?
"Sir?! What should I do?" His young partner inquired.
The captain didn't want to lie. He knew that the ship would sink in about 40 minutes. Then he would be dead in a matter of hours, and if not he would starve to death on some raft.
That's when it hit him. He was tired of doing this. His family was gone, his ship was gone. He couldn't do this anymore. He might as well die.
"Say your prayers boy. Unless we get some miracle we're dying." Another wave rocked the boat at these words.
The young lad didn't know what to think. They plummeted further into the infinite darkness. They both suddenly felt it. That feeling. It's that feeling you might get when you jump off of a giant cliff, or when you fall forever in a dream. They knew there was nothing they could do to change it. Everything was completely hopeless. What was the point? They might as well have pointed a gun at their head.
A crunch was heard from below. The captain climbed downstairs to find a chunk of coral caught in a piece of wood. They had hit Ernest Reef.
"Well, we're screwed." The captain walked over to grab a bottle of whisky.
"Sir there has to be something we can do!" the boy pleaded.
The old man took a swig "Ah quit your yappin. We're over 1500 miles from land! There is not a thing in the world that could help us. I've lived a good life."
"But you can't just-"
"I'm done boy. Leave me be." The young man was confused. This captain was mentor to him, but now he seemed pathetic and infantile chugging liquor in a corner and accepting death.
The wood started creaking as waves splintered it further. The Captain staggered onto the deck. He screamed at the top of his lungs.
"ALRIGHT SEA! IT WAS NICE KNOWING YA! NOW DO YOUR WORST!!" He waited for a wave to smack him as he was standing vulnerable. Why wouldn't it just come already? He was tired of waiting. He just was simply tired.
Unbeknownst to him, a small scaly fin rose out of the water about 60 feet left.
He climbed onto the railing "COME ON YOU PUSSY! KILL ME!! BLOODY KILL ME!!" A wave smacked him with a tumble, as he fell into the vast stormy waters. He tumbled. And his eyes started to close...
Ello' everybody! ChrisTom here! So one day I was playing my second favorite game (first being Pokemon of course) which is called "Nevermore". Nevermore is a series of games made by Adam Westerman, a 20 year old artist who seems to be much like Lewis Carrol. The games themselves take place in a wondrous land called Nevermore, which is on the brink of reality and dreams. It follows the protagonist Olek who is on a search for treasure to help fund his very poor town. I was playing the game for the 67th time when I thought to myself "I bet I could make a small novelization of this brilliant game." I asked Mr. Westerman himself who said that he would love me to write the story of Nevermore. So here I am about to post this story on Pokecommunity, DeviantART, and possibly when it is finished MorningSkyrail.com
This is my first chaptered Fiction, so please post all comments concerns and corrections. As I am typing this I am midway Chapter 6. As of right now though, I am only going to post the Prologue and Chapter 1. I am heavily basing this off of the Nevermore games, but I will be adding some parts not seen in the games. Thank you all for taking the time to read this. Enough of my blabbing, here it is, Nevermore:
Nevermore
Based on the Nevermore Series by Adam Westerman
There are tales of a land faraway. A land where the Sun and the Moon are friends, where the seasons melt into one. A land where the forests are chaotically thick, and the night sky is the darkest blue. A land where monsters coexist with one another. Where beautiful lush landscapes and massive mountains are the norm. This world is singular but coexistent.
For you see, this is a land of dreams. A land where perception is reality. A place where dreams are the same as the waking world.
And in the night when the women and men and children of the world go to rest, something incredible happens. At that moment, right when their eyes start to shut and enter another realm, they see it. For only a split second their wondrous world becomes that land. Their world can see Nevermore.
Chapter 1: The Vanishing
"GOD DAMN IT! IT'S GOING DOWN!!" The captain screamed.
The saltwater ran into his sore throat. His senses were becoming so intense. The only things in his world were the roaring of the waves and the feeling of the cold water smacking his body. The night was filled with the clouds and the waves. A whooshing wave sprayed gallons of angry saltwater onto the splintering deck. He was barely able to climb back into the water filled room.
"Are you sending the god damn help?!" He yelled into the transmitter.
"...A#%N....R...B&B...."
Nothing came back but a few garbled words and static. He knew he was going to die. He loved this ship more than life itself, but it handled horribly in storms. NOAA promised him a new one but they rarely kept to their promises. The lack of funding made his project go down the drain. Why was it so hard to find out where a single sound was coming from?
"Sir?! What should I do?" His young partner inquired.
The captain didn't want to lie. He knew that the ship would sink in about 40 minutes. Then he would be dead in a matter of hours, and if not he would starve to death on some raft.
That's when it hit him. He was tired of doing this. His family was gone, his ship was gone. He couldn't do this anymore. He might as well die.
"Say your prayers boy. Unless we get some miracle we're dying." Another wave rocked the boat at these words.
The young lad didn't know what to think. They plummeted further into the infinite darkness. They both suddenly felt it. That feeling. It's that feeling you might get when you jump off of a giant cliff, or when you fall forever in a dream. They knew there was nothing they could do to change it. Everything was completely hopeless. What was the point? They might as well have pointed a gun at their head.
A crunch was heard from below. The captain climbed downstairs to find a chunk of coral caught in a piece of wood. They had hit Ernest Reef.
"Well, we're screwed." The captain walked over to grab a bottle of whisky.
"Sir there has to be something we can do!" the boy pleaded.
The old man took a swig "Ah quit your yappin. We're over 1500 miles from land! There is not a thing in the world that could help us. I've lived a good life."
"But you can't just-"
"I'm done boy. Leave me be." The young man was confused. This captain was mentor to him, but now he seemed pathetic and infantile chugging liquor in a corner and accepting death.
The wood started creaking as waves splintered it further. The Captain staggered onto the deck. He screamed at the top of his lungs.
"ALRIGHT SEA! IT WAS NICE KNOWING YA! NOW DO YOUR WORST!!" He waited for a wave to smack him as he was standing vulnerable. Why wouldn't it just come already? He was tired of waiting. He just was simply tired.
Unbeknownst to him, a small scaly fin rose out of the water about 60 feet left.
He climbed onto the railing "COME ON YOU PUSSY! KILL ME!! BLOODY KILL ME!!" A wave smacked him with a tumble, as he fell into the vast stormy waters. He tumbled. And his eyes started to close...
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