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[Anastasia.R]

Hi there! Oh, nice to see some traditional work! =] I'll comment on two drawings you made.

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Oh, still life! That's interesting. ^..^
However, I think the drawing is in a weird angle. The paintbrushes (somewhat) and the neck of the jar are in a correct angle, but I think the jar itself with everything else doesn't look right. If I see the inside of the rims of the neck of the jar, I would see more of the inside of the jar. Or, if I saw the jar in more of a front view, I'd see less of the inside of the neck.

I think the shading was done well. The shading on the paintbrushes are a little hard to tell where a light source is, but I can somewhat see it.

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I think this was much better!
I think it looks a lot more transparent, and more like glass. The angle and shading for the bottle gives it a defined shape and I think it was done well! I think the overall picture is a little tilted though, but maybe that's how the bottle ways. ^..^; ​

 

[NintendoQueen]

I LOVE THIS ARTWORK. The classic designs and simply beautiful techniques really show through here. The perfect amount of darkness in almost every work of art I really appreciate that you took your time to post it here as it is some of the best pokemon themed artwork that I have every seen in my life. Nice job 10/10, keep up the good work.

-TChad

Oh my! Thank you so much, that is really sweet of you. I'm glad you really enjoy it TChad! <3

Wow, these are great! :D I love those letters you made on the last page, and your life drawings look amazing! :O Absolutely fantastic. C:

Thank you Eeveon! :] I wish to make more letters, they were a ton of fun to create!

Hi there! Oh, nice to see some traditional work! =] I'll comment on two drawings you made.

Spoiler:

Oh, still life! That's interesting. ^..^
However, I think the drawing is in a weird angle. The paintbrushes (somewhat) and the neck of the jar are in a correct angle, but I think the jar itself with everything else doesn't look right. If I see the inside of the rims of the neck of the jar, I would see more of the inside of the jar. Or, if I saw the jar in more of a front view, I'd see less of the inside of the neck.

I think the shading was done well. The shading on the paintbrushes are a little hard to tell where a light source is, but I can somewhat see it.

Spoiler:

I think this was much better!
I think it looks a lot more transparent, and more like glass. The angle and shading for the bottle gives it a defined shape and I think it was done well! I think the overall picture is a little tilted though, but maybe that's how the bottle ways. ^..^; ​

Thank you for the critiques. They are always welcome! I know the jar is a bit awkward and the paintbrushes are supposed to be tilted a bit because of the refraction in the water inside the jar. I enjoyed drawing the Ball jar a lot. :] Thank you!