No Matter How It Ends

[White Christmas Kitsune]

That poem is really great..All of it (except the last stanza thingie) applies to my ex-best friend and me. My boyfriend cheated on me with her and she did it out of spite because she couldn't get a boyfriend so she had to steal mine..But enough of my rambling. This is supposed to be a critique. XD Back to critiquing.
I think this is a really great poem; it sounds like you wrote it when you were feeling extremely sad or angry or a mixture of the two..I find it's always easier to write poems when your emotions are at a high >.> But I really like this poem..keep writing ^.^

 

[Angel Tabitha]

That poem is really great..All of it (except the last stanza thingie) applies to my ex-best friend and me. My boyfriend cheated on me with her and she did it out of spite because she couldn't get a boyfriend so she had to steal mine..But enough of my rambling. This is supposed to be a critique. XD Back to critiquing.
I think this is a really great poem; it sounds like you wrote it when you were feeling extremely sad or angry or a mixture of the two..I find it's always easier to write poems when your emotions are at a high >.> But I really like this poem..keep writing ^.^

Thanks Kitsune.

 

[flame_chi]

thats a very good poem..
its very good 10/10

 

[Angel Tabitha]

Thanx much,flame.Oi,I still havent found time to work on it at all. ><

 

[Elite Four Lance]

Well, it is a good poem but sad as well.

 

[Midori Chi]

Whoa! Pretty good! It sounds a little gothic but..other than that....Me likes it!

 

[otakugirl14]

It's very beautifully written, and it still shows the sadness with in. Good job!

 

[Midori Chi]

Yeah! What she said! ......I still like it!

 

[Angel Tabitha]

Thanks you guys!Jeez.This is the most attention any of my poems has ever gotten.I can't believe people are still looking at one of my poems.