NOT POKEMON Comotoon's Finest *Critique Please*

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NOT POKEMON Comotoon's Finest Comics *Critique Please*

Here are my comics I'm looking for constructive criticism.

My Comics

Tale of Bravio *Current and favorite Comic*
This is my favorite comic that I've made so far. So far I've uploaded a cover, and the prologue.

Click on the picture for a link to the comic's site where there's more pages.

Life of Grim
Wow this ones okay I made when I was experimenting with blurred backgrounds.


Ristar vs Sonic
A page from a comic I planned to do but decided not to may complete it later. It's Ristar's landing to earth.