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Ofcannon - Gonna keep posting them till you like it xD

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    But this time, it ain't got the ugh art, i've changed how it looks completely (luckily).


    Could you tell me how you like the art style.
     
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    Well... it looks absolutely nothing like a Pokémon!

    But the card is well made - very powerful second attack, but I'd say it was within reason. :)
     
    You need some repairs for your Ofcannon

    I don't understand the art. Am I inside him? xD

    The effect for Shoot is a bit 2-3 pixels upper than the right placement.

    And your illus. text is... it's like that again... broken

    *sigh* at least it doesn't feed my dirty mind again... xD
     
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    Well, even if it has nothing to do with Pokémon...at least it no longer has anything to do with anything else...:P
     
    Well, I like the attacks

    Not sure 'bout the pokemon tho (is it a fake pokemon????Looks like a regular cannon to me)

    Well its an improvement from the original Ofcannon, (in a sense:P )
     
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    It's meant to be a Pokemon. It isn't dirty this time.

    I didn't mean the last 'un to be dirty.

    Anyway, it's a cannn Pokemon.
     
    It doesn't look like a pokemon at all, it looks like a wood board with some circles that i'm guessing are supposed to be wheels.

    Pokemon are supposed to look like creatures, not like plain objects. I just made a little crappy sketch in paint of what i'd think a cannon pokemon would look similar to. It would be fire/steel too.
    [PokeCommunity.com] Ofcannon - Gonna keep posting them till you like it xD


    https://img129.imageshack.us/img129/1306/sketchcannonlg2.png

    He looks similar to some little robot in a game i've played, forgot what it was though T_T See how his nose is like a cannon? Thats more pokemonish

    But yeah, pokemon aren't supposed to look like plain items.
    Oh, and the 2nd attack should at least have to flip for that.
     
    Nice pic Lunanai, now that's more like a pokemon

    er wait... why is the fire thingy on the front:cross-eye

    Meh it cool anyway
     
    Well that explains it...

    Intersting art all the same.

    I think I might try drawing a pokecannon.

    EDIT: Here it is, not too creative though
     
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