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[41victory]

Ok take a look at my upcoming team. If you see something wrong with it. Constructive criticism would be helpful

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Ninjask - Item leftovers
Jolly
252 ATK/ 252 SPD/ 6 HP
Baton Pass
Night Slash
Substitute
Roost

Breloom - Item Posion Orb
Adamant
252 ATK/ 252 SPD/ 6 HP
Spore
Seed Bomb
Substitute
Focus Punch

Ampharos - Item focus sash
Modest
252 SP.ATK/ 252 SPD/ 6 HP
Power Gem
Signal Beam
Discharge
Focus Blast

Fortress - Item Leftovers
Relaxed
252 DEF/ 252 HP/ 6 SP.D
Rapid Spin
Stealth Rock
Earthquake
Rock Slide

Milotic - Item Leftovers
Calm
252 SP.DEF/ 252 HP/ 6 DEF
Mirror Coat
Hypnosis
Recover
Ice Beam

Nidoking - Item life orb
Adamant
252 ATK/ 252 SPD/ 6 HP
Megahorn
Avalanche
Earth Power
Roar


So that?s my team. Help would be appreciated.

 

[Azonic]

Ninjask - Item leftovers
Jolly
252 ATK/ 252 SPD/ 6 HP
Baton Pass
Night Slash
Substitute
Roost

Jolly nature? Its not going to be outran anytime soon. Adamant please, to invest the most in inducing damage. Heh, SubRoosting is a first on Ninjask. I'd rather pass a Swords Dance though. X Scissor will do more damage than Night Slash will because of the STAB boost that Ninjask gets.

Ninjask @ Leftovers
Trait: Speed Boost
Nature: Adamant
EVs: 252 Attack / 252 Speed / 4 HP
- X Scissor
- Swords Dance
- Substitute
- Baton Pass

Breloom - Item Posion Orb
Adamant
252 ATK/ 252 SPD/ 6 HP
Spore
Seed Bomb
Substitute
Focus Punch

Its called Toxic Orb. XD Eh, its pretty standard. Make sure its the Poison Heal ability though ;D Nothing wrong with this one.

Ampharos - Item focus sash
Modest
252 SP.ATK/ 252 SPD/ 6 HP
Power Gem
Signal Beam
Discharge
Focus Blast

Ahh, haven't seen one of these in a while. Ampharos is pretty slow. It needs a way to boost speed, I believe it can learn Agility. Thunderbolt outclasses Discharge with a higher power. Eh, I recommend you swap out this guy for a better special sweeper, I'm not too fond of it.

Fortress - Item Leftovers
Relaxed
252 DEF/ 252 HP/ 6 SP.D
Rapid Spin
Stealth Rock
Earthquake
Rock Slide

How about Spikes instead of Stealth Rock? Spikes is more rare than Stealth Rock, and you can set layers of it. Also, you can get rid of Rock Slide for Gyro Ball or Explosion, that would be my suggestion.

Milotic - Item Leftovers
Calm
252 SP.DEF/ 252 HP/ 6 DEF
Mirror Coat
Hypnosis
Recover
Ice Beam

Oi, no water moves on Milo? >: I'd use Surf instead of Mirror Coat. Give it a bold nature and max out defense.

Nidoking - Item life orb
Adamant
252 ATK/ 252 SPD/ 6 HP
Megahorn
Avalanche
Earth Power
Roar

I don't know much about him, but I can see a strategy going on with Forretress's Spikes and Nidoking's Roar. If you give Nidoking Stealth rock, Stealth Rock AND Spikes (forry) will damage a lot more! A great combo.

 

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Ok take a look at my upcoming team. If you see something wrong with it. Constructive criticism would be helpful



Ninjask - Item leftovers
Jolly
252 ATK/ 252 SPD/ 6 HP
Baton Pass
Night Slash
Substitute
Roost

Adamant please.

Breloom - Item Posion Orb
Adamant
252 ATK/ 252 SPD/ 6 HP
Spore
Seed Bomb
Substitute
Focus Punch

Awesome

Ampharos
- Item focus sash
Modest
252 SP.ATK/ 252 SPD/ 6 HP
Power Gem
Signal Beam
Discharge
Focus Blast

I'd rather have Electrivire for this team, but Ampharos is pretty good.

Fortress - Item Leftovers
Relaxed
252 DEF/ 252 HP/ 6 SP.D
Rapid Spin
Stealth Rock
Earthquake
Rock Slide

Great spinner

Milotic - Item Leftovers
Calm
252 SP.DEF/ 252 HP/ 6 DEF
Mirror Coat
Hypnosis
Recover
Ice Beam

Replace Mirror Coat with Surf/Hydro Pump.

Nidoking - Item life orb
Adamant
252 ATK/ 252 SPD/ 6 HP
Megahorn
Avalanche
Earth Power
Roar

Love this

So that's my team. Help would be appreciated.

I like this team. I really do. Lacks the common "OMG BLISSEY, OMG TAUNTDOS, OMG UBERCHOMP" However, it makes up for it using versatility.

 

[Anti]

I love unique too, but that doesn't stop this team from being weak to every special sweeper in the game besides the few Milotic can wall. But what it can't...SpecsMence, Gengar, Azelf, Porygon-Z, Alakazam...loads of special weaknesses.

Also, anything physical Forretress can't wall will also break this team. Some of these threats include Infernape, Garchomp, Salamence, Heracross, and Tyranitar. Gyarados is also a potential problem.

On top of that, mixed pokemon like Infernape, Kingdra, Electivire, and Salamence all tear through this team's walling.

With that in mind, I would replace Amphy for a special wall to wall the specials that pound this team. I would also consider getting Forretress some real help with what breaks it. A fighting resist and ground immunity like cress, Gliscor, or Weezing would be helpful, probably over Ninjask.