Okaay! Yugioh topic.

[Zaikiro]

Apprently about every 2 weeks or so I have posted a new deck to try for a tourney, for a review and rate and fix I never try hard to improve it. :sleeping: . I wil Now. :) Apprently

I do not have any of these following cards.But I am trying to get some of them. Some are mispelled. Sorry. ^__/

Mirror Force
Black Luster Soldier Envoy the Beginning
Exelied Force
Don Zalong
D.D Warrior Lady
Rolyal Decree
Nimble Mongora
Ring of Desurction
Jinzo
Airknight Parisiph
United we Stand
CeaseFire
Greadfried the Swordmaster
D.D Assaliant

Now my Deck





















Tributes: 3
-Freed the Matchless General
-Mobius the Frost Monarch
-Granmarg the Rock Monarch

Monsters: 18
_Injection Fairy Lily
-Sagan
-Insect Night[2]
-Mataza the Zapper
-Cliff the Trap Remover
-Amanoness Swords Woman
Magician of Faith
-Command Knight
-Gigantes[2]
-Tribe Infecting Virus
-Gearfreid the Iron Knight[2]
-Giant Rat
-Night Assaliant[2]
-Obnoxious Celtic Guard

Spell:17
-Graceful Charity
-Snatch Steal
-Heavy Storm
-Mage Power
-Nobleman of Crossout
-Pot of Greed
-Swords of Revealing Light
-Scapegoat[3]
-Premature Burial
-Mystical Space Typhoon
-Lighting Vortex
-Creature Swap[2]
-Book of Moon
-Renforcement of the Army


Traps:7
-Torrential Tribute
-Call of the Haunted
-Divine Wrath
-Negate Atack
-Bottomless Trap Hole
-Draining Shield

I am trying a Earth/Warrior theme. Please Rate and Fix. Thank You.

 

[Syousuke]

45 cards? Neat deck.
Im researching some of your cards, however, i feel there is some conspiracy here.. or something, anyways..

here are some -s and +s..

- Granmarg
+ Jinzo
Granmarg = i dont know your theme but whatever this card aint so useful.
Adding a Jinzo in here would work quite well, although i dont know about that stand-alone crap..
EDIT: Ocrap, sorry. Dont worry about this one i didnt read your whole post. Heh.

Freed works quite well in these kind of decks, i need a few.

- Mage
+ united
You know the drill.. united would work better in someways tho its got its downsides, i still say united. IMO
EDIT: Oh wait you dont have this too, :surprised

- Amazonness Swordowmn
+ MSLV4 or 6?
I dont know about you, but Amazonness wont work that well IMO.
Also, i dont know what to replace it with, but I put some of the MS family there.. 4 or 6 is recommended.. They might prove useful even with the lack of attack power. I dont think your doing ana ttack power deck, no?

I dont have many suggestions since i dont play in tourneys and i suck but im just putting up my 2 cents.

 

[Zaikiro]

45 cards? Neat deck.
Im researching some of your cards, however, i feel there is some conspiracy here.. or something, anyways..

here are some -s and +s..

- Granmarg
+ Jinzo
Granmarg = i dont know your theme but whatever this card aint so useful.
Adding a Jinzo in here would work quite well, although i dont know about that stand-alone crap..
EDIT: Ocrap, sorry. Dont worry about this one i didnt read your whole post. Heh.

I said a Earth/Warrior theme on the bottom of the post.Jinzo. I need.Granmarg is useful with Book of Moon and food for Gigantes. I will get a Jinzo soon.When there is a new stock of tins. And it's okay.

Freed works quite well in these kind of decks, i need a few.

- Mage
+ united
You know the drill.. united would work better in someways tho its got its downsides, i still say united. IMO
EDIT: Oh wait you dont have this too, :surprised

It's okay.^_^ I had a had a United but I traded it for a Mage.

- Amazonness Swordowmn
+ MSLV4 or 6?
I dont know about you, but Amazonness wont work that well IMO.
Also, i dont know what to replace it with, but I put some of the MS family there.. 4 or 6 is recommended.. They might prove useful even with the lack of attack power. I dont think your doing ana ttack power deck, no?

I dont have many suggestions since i dont play in tourneys and i suck but im just putting up my 2 cents.

The family is quite useful in decks. It would make my deck better if I get another Book of Moon also. I plan to get those.

Thank's for you help. ^^ They were really useful. Any more syggestions?