one piece:freedom of the sea dragons

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i sat on the docks, legs swinging freely in the breeze. "waht do you want?" i aisd to teh aproching figure from behind me. "got me already?" said a gruff voice. "not that hard, your as heavy as an ancor" i siad looking around at him. he was wearing a naval uniform, but it was stretched, due to his bulging musles.

"why are you hear? not waiting for pirates again are you?" he said. "no, just admiring the sea" i siad looking back out at it. "you know, as soon as you set foot on a pirate ship of our own free will, i can arrest you for all those vaults youve cracked" he said "how do you know it was me?" i asked "come on, how many people can bite through a steel door?" he siad

i didnt answer this. "why are you here?" i asked. "your mother, she wants you to come home" he siad shaking his head. "i told her, im not coming back" i said stubornly "yea, well, i promicved 'id bring you back again" he siad "i could take you down easily, so dont lay a han on me" i said threatenengly "hows taht?" he asked surprised

"you know how ive been practicing with those wooden swords latly?" i asked "yea? what about it?" he sad confuzed "this" i said picking up two swords thta were laying next to me "where did you get those?" he asked "bought 'em, it was only 100 berries" i said

he stood there, not talking. "why do you want to be like your dad?" he asked suddenly "why?" "because, i dont, i dont want to run around trying to save wahts already lost, i want to be king of the pirates!" i said "youd have to beat monkey d. luffy to do that, and hes a rubbrerman, remember what he did to arlong?"

"yea, i remember, but im barly a merman, all i have is my teeth, and my gils, no webbed apendages, no fin, i look normal from a distance" i said baring my teeth "stanlex, le-" "dont call me taht, call me shark" i said angrilly "why shark?" he asked "because, the great white shark is teh king of the ocean, just like me" i said looking baco out to sea

"is that.....no, it cant be......theyve finally come" i siad exitedly "who, where? i cant see anyone" he said looking around "oh, be quiet randall" i said "why? im trying to see waht your so exited about" he said sitting down for once

i got out my trusty telescope and looked into teh distance, yea, it was a pirate flag, but i wonder whos......

i got into my rowboat and started speeding away twords the ship "where are you going?" randall asked "to follow my dreams!" i yelled, as i sped twords the unknow pirate ship, now, if only they will let me join.....

(im heading twords a pirate ship, i dont know whos, so choose who wants me, someone who can fight underwater, breath underwater, and can rip a steel vault door off its hinges with thiier teeth, not to mentions carries two swords, so, who wants me?)
 
- -;; and you, DM8000, have got to work on those millions of spelling errors you make each post. Remember to capitalize the start of each sentence and to capitalize the I's> *wants to make the correct post but theres too many errors and gots to go to school now lol*
 
(sp sue me, thats how i rpg, htats how i started, thats the way ill rpg when i die, got it? since when were you a mod anyway?)

i rowed out to the ship, hoping theyed accept me, wodering who they were.....wait, it was juat a little ship! a rowboat like mine! "hey, you need some help?" i called to them "thanks for asking, but no, im looking for pirates" he said "then wemight as well travel together, im looking for them too" i dsia proudly once i got next to his boat "im stanlex, but call me shark" i said "im zeta, and why should i call you shark?" he asked

i bared my sharp teeth and bit one of my oars in half "thats why" i said "your a merman" he said grimly "only on my dad's side, and he was only half merman" i explained "how old are you kid?" "thirteen, why?" i asked

he was quiet for along time

"your too young to travel with me" he said "waht was taht?" i asked angrilly "your too young" "i am not! im probably stronger than you are!" i said indignantly "prove it" he said pointing to two rocks in the distance "no boat, first to destroy their rock wins, i get left rock, you get right" "fine, your on" i said jumping in the water

i sped off twords my rock and was nearlt there when, he went past me in his boat!

"hey, no boats!" i yelled "were pirates, waht do you expect!" he yelled laughing

that was it, i was kicking it into high gear, i sped twords my rock with blinding speed and bit into it, completly olbiterating it "waht the????" he yelled looking ahead of him at my rock "i was taking it easy on you, and like i said, im sdtonger tahn you are"
 
occ: I will post even if you don't tell me I am in. Because DM8000 alredy put me sooo.....

ic: "Godd work kid" Zeta said very surprised. After a while Zeta asked to shark "Why are you looking for pirats, kid?" He then saw that far away there was an enormous boat. "What the... I have seen that one before" Zeta said "Shark, I'm going. If you want to follow me I woun't stop you." Then Zeta went on the direction of the enormous boat, hoping that it wasn't the one he had saw before.
 
"ok, just stop callin me kid" i said jumping back into my boat "yea, whatever" zeta said rowing off twords the boat, or was it an island? i really couldnt tell........
when we got there we saw a huge ship! this thing was bigger than my entire town! "this cant be good....." i mumbled to myself
 
Serjo gasped as he looked over the side of the ship and saw anouther that almost matched the greatness of his own, "christ! what the...." he stops short to catch his ciggarte. "Urving! Urving get over her!"

Urving shows up from the lower deck, "what is it captain?"

"Look!" Serjio says pointing to the ship that was near the dock, "I don't want that ship to leave the harber! Sink it!"

Urving nods and calls to Nancy who had fallowed him, "tell Loures to get the cannons ready and aim for that ship!"

Nancy nods and calls to Loures who was already starting lunch, "forget lunch Loures, we have a ship to sink!"

Loures drops his knives and goes to the cannons aiming at the ship, "FIRE WARNING SHOT!" Serjio calls.

Loures shoots a cannon ball at the ship and it nearaly missed the bow. "WARNING SHOT FIRED!" he says streaching an arm out and giving the thumbs up.
 
they fired off their cannons at a large ship in the harbor. "why did they do that?" i asked "because, well, i dont know" zeta said confuzed "but thats a navy ship, wed better get going or theyll think were a member of their crew". "your right, lets go" i said rowing off "hey, waht about me?!" zeta said following after we got a fair distance away, we saw teh navy ship leave the dock and head straight twords the giant ship.

"we'd better get out of here, fast" i said "no, ya think" zeta said sarcasticly "or, we could help them and make some new friends" i said "help who? the navy? no way" "no, not the navy you idiot, the pirate ship, maybe theyd let us join if we did" "nah, it would never work, lets go" zeta said rowing off

after we got out of distance of teh giant ship, i heard grumbling coming from zeta "you hungry over there?" i asked "yea, you got anything to eat?" "no, but illl be right back" i siad diving into the water

'hmm, aha, heres some good fish' i tought 'and some seaweed' i said plucking it 'and a crab or two' i thought grabbing its claws in my free hand after i got back to the surface, i put all of it in my boat "why are you putting all of it in our boat!" zeta said angrilly "youll see, and dont touch it" i said as an after thought

i dove back down, now where was that fish i saw......there it was! i sped after it, i grabed it and went back to teh surface with my catch "here we go" i said killing the fish and putting it in my boat "how are we going to eat that?" zeta said "sushi" i said simply pulling out my sword "sushi 'eh, never had taht before" he siad

i chopped up the fish on an extra plank on the back of my boat, it was just sitting there without a purpose severall inches above the water, and it was always loose, so, i just took it off and used it as a cutting board

i cracked oped teh crab claws with my teeth, and layed out teh meat, i cut up the fish and threw the heads and tails over boardinto the sea, next came teh seaweed, i layed it out and started to put the meat from the crabs and the fish on it "you almost dont yet?" zeta asked angrilly, i think hunger was getting to him "be quiet or ill eat you!" i said annoyed

i handed teh plak with his sushi over to him "take it off, not the entire plank, we get three peices each, but there really big so thats alot" i siad taking out my sword just in case "ok, ok, three pieces, look, one, two, three" he said taking the pieces off in turn

"thats good" he said as he bit into the sushi "your welcome" i said as i ate my sushi "for what?" he said confuzed "if it wasnt for me, youd still be starving" i siad laying back eating my last piece of sushi "thats true" he siad leaning back, his last piece untouched

we layed in our boats as they drifted with our sails billowing lightly, we were at piece, along with the world, wait, wasnt this the time of pirates? where are they? there should be ships everywhere! this just wasnt right.......

(well, this is the edited part, noone seems to want to post....)

zeta's ship was almost tipped over from an unknown impact "what was that?" he said sitting up

a fin came out of the water

"sharks" i said "kings of the sea"

"like you can relate" zeta said sarcasticly

"just watch" i siad getting out my swords and diving in

"what are you doing? youll drown donw there!" zeta said

he was wrong, becasue of my merman blood, i had gills

i started swimming twords teh giant shark, this thing was huge! atlease 50ft.!

"shark bite strike!" i said underwater

i sped twords the shark, my blades spinning, i was two feet away when my swords made contact with the shark's neck area, the water turned red from the impact.....

(over to you someone)
 
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(Sorry been gone so long! Stupid me forgot to subscribe here. *whacks head repeatedly w/ keyboard* Anyway, I'm back and ready to start! What's happened so far?)
 
(you have to put a des first, or have you already? im so confuzed right now >-< )
 
((Me to... It doesnt' make any sence... @.@))
 
(i checked, she has posted beofore, so now im not confuzed, but i just got dumped....why me? this is teh third girl why me?)
 
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